great MC, a unique insert into an OP universe instead of being OP himself too. Grammar is on point and the story is developing quickly without feeling rushed. Keep it up.
WELCOME..................................................................................................................................................................................
I already read this on twisting the hellmouth, it's an interesting story about how Xander would run a slayer house in the DC universe and the consequences of bringing the "white knight" to a world where the heroes never kill the vilains. My only complaint is that there was very little action, hope this story continues or evolves from where it was left off.