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UNIQUE!! The amount of research you have done for this book is vivid. The writer has a good imagination, the plot has been well articulated to match the level of your creativity. Though it was my first time reading this kind of genre, the writer's study on various mythologies and prefect word-building interested me. Keep Going!!
Wow. This is an interesting read with a lot of thought that went into it. It’s deep and makes one think. I like an easy read that’s fun so for me the genre is not my style. But I will still read it because it’s good and I will like to see what happens.🤷🏻♀️✌🏻🤔 Characters need some work but well done. some eng. lang. problems. Keep working on it👏🏻
The interesting, especially the author's beliefs or thoughts being conveyed with it. It was a decent read, the plotline was cliché, but this story has its own spice to incite the readers. However, there are a noticeable amount of grammatical errors and typos. It'll be better if the author can take note to fix those errors.
It was a decent read, I liked the plotline and the characters had their own personalities helping to create a good story. However, there were many mistakes with the grammar, syntax and tenses, which disrupted the flow of the read very frequently. This made the experience of reading the story not as smooth and clean as it could have gone. Author-san, focus on sticking to past tense when writing and make sure everything agrees. Download Grammarly if that helps. Otherwise Great Job Author-san!
Even so that this is your first book, I must confess that you really did a good job. More so first time writing a book in English, you did the work as a pro already. one thing I will like yo correct is the cover. Though it has the right picture the letterings on it has a dull colour which is bad. Please correct it at your convenience. One love.