Comments of chapter undefined of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
Keetarp
Chapter comments28
Wow, was I the only one hoping to at least see the wedding? the story gets increasingly "better", I "love" the random jumps where all emotional development is skipped just in appeal to the development of power, that's what makes this novel have so much "life" and not seem like a diary of a stupid robot in search for constant power. It's not as if characters not linked to acquiring resources and developing power don't even have lines. What a "great" story this is, full of "vitality".
Finally the Spirit Mark world came back into the novel. I thought the author only intended to use that as a one time thing for him to advance and gain knowledge about the morning star realm when he was still rank 3. Excited to see what's in store for the spirit mark world and Leylin's domination of it.
