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This is the best invincible fan fiction I have read. Its better than the invincible tv show. Please don't forget to use the flaxan world as a hide out, training time chamber and use the technology of the world and if possible even improve it. An example would be nano technology. Which can be used by mc, his family, friends and future team if needed to improve physique and healing factor to fight enemies. Please don't drop it its really good.
I always wanted to read a fan fiction that developed the knight path as well cause it has a lot of potential. From what I remember it uses life fore to improve stats, if leylin could research and understand the soul he could have done the same with life force. MC could share this with his future family.
This is a really good fanfiction I hope you release chapters regularly. Your story will definitely reach number 1. If you do that then it will get over a million views or more. Even if 1% or 0.1% of a million viewers join for membership with you it should support you to carry on writing great fanfiction even with writers block. Please đ don't drop this fanfiction.
The start is really good I hope you continue this work. I hope you make the mc travel to all lands and find magic that he can use to strengthen himself his dragon and his family that he trusts. I haven't seen anyone try to unite the whole world into 1 empire and try to improve the world by getting rid of any current or future threats permanently. Also it will be really good if mc adds schools for commoners and improves hygiene and pregnancy births that are common sense in the modern world. Also dragons will grow more quickly with exercise, good diet and be free to roam around and not be locked up when they are old enough to fly and hunt.