Reviews of Smurf in Marvel+HP world (A Dota2 - gamer - marvel - hp fanfic)

so far a great story, for those who play dota, the desire to play a game after reading, things happen in a way that is feasible which is cool, since in many stories many things seem absurd, another cool thing is that until now the author made the mc focus on developing, as opposed to stories in which they focus on the mc getting women at every place they give and end up spoiling the development of everything. if it continues like this it will be a fantastic story.

I like gamer novels but sometimes there’s just too much technical detail that gets overly used. call it what you want but in my opinion it’s just filler to make up for lack of content.

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it is enjoyable story with super murder hobo mage character my issue is there is to many skill is given to the protagonist and with little no problem or weakness