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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancients World

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DraconicWulf
DraconicWulfLv15DraconicWulf

thanks for the chapter

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NoMoreWtfTakenToo
NoMoreWtfTakenTooLv2NoMoreWtfTakenToo

You should try to at least put pov changes in different paragraphs. Learn from the Japanese light novel pros. So much easier on the eyes to read those. I can read their stories all day, but this story gets my eyes tired after only 3 Chapters since I have to focus my eyes hard on every word in order not to miss a sudden pov change.

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G0DSH4ND
G0DSH4NDLv4G0DSH4ND

Thanks for the chapter. And as a suggestion, I think it would be better if you indicated where you change pov. Just a suggestion😊

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Atlas_cf43
Atlas_cf43Lv10Atlas_cf43

thanks for the chapter â˜ș

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Lordnest
LordnestLv4Lordnest

That was great improvement for stat panel.. 👍👍

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DreamedLullaby
DreamedLullabyLv15DreamedLullaby

Thanks for the chapter~đŸ±

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CallmeSweet
CallmeSweetLv14CallmeSweet

thanks

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Alan_J_Francis
Alan_J_FrancisLv14Alan_J_Francis

Thanks for the chapter!!

Philip_Ballnz
Philip_BallnzLv3Philip_Ballnz

the change of listing your stats would be good if they came in perhaps a number first and data afterwards because many read this on cell phones and others with bigger screens see it all lined up. Cell phones with small screens the data get seriously jumbled up. Thank you for a great read

ZalinMage
ZalinMageLv5ZalinMage

Definitely liked the change with the skills, though the stats are a bit clumped. Also might be good to skip parts that don't change ,Ie Name Level exp . . . Active skills Or show stats but not the skills if there is no change to the skills Only showing the full stat screen occasionally, and passive skills when he gets a new one.