easyread
You should try to at least put pov changes in different paragraphs. Learn from the Japanese light novel pros. So much easier on the eyes to read those. I can read their stories all day, but this story gets my eyes tired after only 3 Chapters since I have to focus my eyes hard on every word in order not to miss a sudden pov change.
Definitely liked the change with the skills, though the stats are a bit clumped. Also might be good to skip parts that don't change ,Ie Name Level exp . . . Active skills Or show stats but not the skills if there is no change to the skills Only showing the full stat screen occasionally, and passive skills when he gets a new one.