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Lordnest2yrCommentedCh 43 The Noob Works Harder- Lordnest2yrCommentedCh 2 Awakening
- Lordnest2yrCommentedCh 140 Dealing with Cain
- Lordnest2yrCommentedCh 250 Hiatus
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Potential starter with great story buiiding.. I enjoy the way story describe character and i have a fun to look with a family play together.. And you know what.. Spoiler alert.. Joker.. What a nice class.. That was wonderful idea.. And with skill of card dice and token.. You really like to gamble man.. Good luck with the plot armor.. Im in, so go forth sailing with your tales...
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Good Luck
This chapter has been deleted. - Lordnest2yrCommentedCh 249 Yo
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Well idk how the fiction story can make our belief britle.. But just hope you have a peace time.. Honestly if i can give opinion.. There no conflict with belief if even the story didnt have earth and religion.. But yeah this is fiction story and if your story didnt make other people degrade his moral or make villain so what sin did you make? No.. Your story make other people smile.. And make people smile is good virtue. But im just a brat so that was my naive thought.. Hope your have a peaceful mind and keep your going with everything you do. Aamiin
Ch 165 Chapter 164 - We Are Here - Lordnest3yrCommentedCh 1 Prelude
- Lordnest3yrCommentedCh 48 The Mountains of Helda I
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There minor miss with unspent stat from lv 5 to lv 6.. Total of unspent stat still 40 from lv 5 - lv 6.. And i think your have a little mess.. But its minor.. You can rewrite to upcoming chapter or you can tweak bass stat from 55 55 60 55 55 And minus 10 so you didnt have to edit a lot of chapter.. Caiyoo!!
Ch 7 Hitting the levels hard and my first dungeon - Lordnest3yrCommented
Yo, dear author,, how about you split the interface for skill and perk for passive and active.. There skill with level 1/10 but there was a skill that have non level.. So i think you can just split it so when the skill added like 30 skill or more,, your not misspell or reader can make easy to read them.. Just opinion.. I enjoy your story.. Keep it up
Ch 43 Finding The Hermit Flint III - Lordnest3yrCommentedCh -1 End Times
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You should call this dark age
"All male individuals of your species have been exterminated, to allow us to implant our fertile, lab-created seeds into females, which act as incubators. In this way, new generations will proliferate and give birth to a new, more evolved human race". - Lordnest3yrCommented
Get well soon
May I see you guys again. - Lordnest3yrCommented
Your not undeveloped. Take a pride
At this moment, the beginning of the Sacred Commmander, Leader of the 9 Saintly Generals was about to begin - this uprising would be one so momentous. No one could stop it, not even my undeveloped writing skills. - Lordnest3yrCommented
Come back please. , you cant handle Ara Ara
" Ara ara...I did not know we had visitors." - Lordnest3yrCommented
Its debuff
Effect 1: Reduces experience gained from killing zombies by ninety-nine percent. - Lordnest3yrCommented
LoL
The translation microchip in Xia Fei's body was very useful in this matter. With its translation, the essence of the poems had been preserved to its greatest extent, unlike many other translated works, which was just an insult to the original work.