someone had vitiligo before they got the mutagen. now they can camouflage.

You should try to at least put pov changes in different paragraphs. Learn from the Japanese light novel pros. So much easier on the eyes to read those. I can read their stories all day, but this story gets my eyes tired after only 3 Chapters since I have to focus my eyes hard on every word in order not to miss a sudden pov change.

This whole story needs a lot more commas, feels like you can't catch your breath.