Tim_Saian
I'll talk about the quick points because of which people remain hesitant to pick an original story to read. ● Quality, if anyone complained you better write your own book which has to be excellent than this. (I'm personally a fan of this author because of the flow, vocabulary and the techniques of narrations he uses) ● Storyline, just focus on the title (Wink) ● I've nothing to criticize since the author has grasp over everything and seems professional into the field. ( just give it a go xD)
I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.
After reading 130 chapters. There are quite few things I like very much about this book that I would like to share: 1. Characters aren't flat, one-sided and brainless, quite the opposite complexity, daily struggles and depth are normal. I especially love that MC isn't plowing through everybody and everything but makes mistakes and suffers the consequences. There is only one small flew in few characters, it's their a bit cliche humor. 2. World building is quite complex and feels real, not making the reader question if other characters are mental or physics doesn't exist. 3. Realism is best served when there are heavy topics involved and nobody has a perfect simple solution, which is the case here. 4. Only one thing that I kinda dislike is a bit slow paced action and I don't mean the timeline of actions, because I would even like for the MC to progress more painfully, but the dialogues between characters reveling their mental state. Hope it helps, I really like this book so far, I'll update my review after or around chapter 200.
Slow Slow slow Slow pace, weak mc well not my cup of tea, but anyway still five star cause everything else is ok.. so if you r into mc who is strugling,weak with good potential, snail pace And well written (no grammar mistake) story well here you go you gonna Enjoy this but for me thats it i am out...