Well it was fun reading it, but I wont pay to read it in such a stupid e-book reader, so thanks until now! I will be there again when you switch to Patre*n ;)

Aaaand i still love it!

I see that his story in 'human' world is starting, at least the part where he is interested in underground qi users where he tries to fit in. So after adventuring with his friends/family/clan where he was bold but and frinedly, in this part i feel bit detached from his surrounding, because again this is a start of this part. And this was heart-warming chapter, thus the comment 😚❤️Didnt mean it to be rude 🙄 Story is interesting as it was from the start.

I see you are still keeping it interesting with interlooping chapters like this. It started to get bit grey with just his human body and affairs, big thumbs up for this one 👍😍😋

QI user in cyber body, exchanging wood for a metal. I am starting to get deus-ex game vibes here 😘✨ Nice one.

Wooow😍 Nice one! It's getting more and more interesting.

Like a Lego 😜✨

Well done 😊✨❤️

Could be that he dosent want to push her ideas farther then needed when he is not sure where she stands.

Little dive to the story behind 😊 nice. Jia will be surprised what she poked, i hope ✨😜

I will just watch for a sec girls 😊

Intimidation done the right way, but it should not be overused. Nobles always find new ways to put down big threats. Its just matter of time they start picking up non-adventurers.

Very sweet 😚

Nice chapter with good things promissed in future 😚 but. i woukd like no shortings on naughty parts 🤔😍

I see that when your pa*reon was blocked there are no more content even here, there are other services where your readers can contribute to you if WN is not willing to give you this opportunity.

I dont think its in need of rewrite it was enjoyable so far, if Author wants that to go for more evil MC, just explore the current story, i think that there is possibilities is blood elf heretage, flower deamons, disaster, or something forcing him to leave in search for new home. Just let him grow up a bit. I enjoy the writing anyway so np eather way.

I feel like the Protectors will tax him real fast 🙄😜

And who is the prey now!