Ritankar_Sarkar_
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
beginning is very intriguing!!
A very successful for a beginning chapter in my opinion. Changes in MC's emotions're very successful.WN readers generally do not like many illustration for feelings but I'm against it. It's good.
editing could be better but the novel is superior to a lot other works.
This is a successful beginning, amazing and perfect attraction to the story
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The beginning was so interesting.U may work on your grammar ,by the way whole story was as interesting as beginning.(Experience was excellent)
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