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KaGen

KaGen

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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE
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    Regime Killer
    Eastern Fantasy · KaGen
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    The writing style is good, the length of the paragraphs is enough long for being easy to read. The percentage of the dialogues is high, it is increasing readability. The updating frequency maybe increase. A good novel, thanks to the author.

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    Double Iris
    Teen · ibbygal
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    It is good. It is very good. Expressions are effective. The flow of the emotions is strong. It is attractive. One of the best dramas in my opinion. Congratulations to the author.

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    Lost
    Contemporary Romance · BlackWidOw6648
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    A bitter scene in the entrance after the cute presentation of the author. It was like an emotional climax. It was impressive. Giving related names to the chapters would attract more readers too. Keep going on to write, please.

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    Secret Love
    Contemporary Romance · CodeyVanilla
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    a cute entrance:)

    I apologize for the grammatical typos and errors, I'll edit as time goes on like I'm doing now.
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    Secret Love
    Contemporary Romance · CodeyVanilla
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    A perfect entrance. I never saw a beginning like this. Characters presented themselves in the beginning chapters. An excellent idea. The structure of the sentences is good too, it is quite readable. Congratulations to the author. An advice: Giving a related name to chapters might attract the readers more.

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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Contemporary Romance · 4Maggievasiredz
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    what a luxury life. MC's should be poor in my opinion, they should fight for eating :D

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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Contemporary Romance · 4Maggievasiredz
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    Coffee lover MC type. One of my bests.

    This rain doesn't stop. I hate it. I'm already late. I have to get my coffee from Starbucks and then I have to go to the office.
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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Contemporary Romance · 4Maggievasiredz
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    A good drama. The flow of the story is good. The third chapter is long enough but the story needs more updates. Write more chapters, please keep going on writing.

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    The last leaf on the tree
    Magical Realism · igbi9nak5
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    A dramatic entrance. A various story. It is a success. You should try this one. Adding chapter names would be more effective. Thanks to the author.

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    Lorraines Bullet
    Contemporary Romance · Unicorn_Kaki
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    This book is a very actual one. I felt myself in it in these quarantine days :) (you will understand when you read) It includes many technical details, I enjoyed it by reading in detail. I highly recommend it to all readers.

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    DarkMan
    Fantasy · GenX_Conectados
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    authors choose a soft beginning in the opening chapter but yours is very active. It's good, man.

    Ch 1 DarkMan would never forget the exile.
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    DarkMan
    Fantasy · GenX_Conectados
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    ops "Covid" [img=faceslap]

    DarkMan would never forget the exile to which he was sent to earth by the creator of the 7 games; he had to hide the angelic identity from him and behave balanced living a healthy, youthful, professional life. He must never again be mean as he would be deported and the inevitable extermination of him. The strategy is to get other beings of nature to do work for him and he had a well-elaborated plan that I call: 'Covid System', with this system to be implemented for three years, he would manage to subjugate all humanity, before him.
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    DarkMan
    Fantasy · GenX_Conectados
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    A top drama. The introduction of the characters, in the beginning, was a good idea. The story is good, illustrations are successful too. There are no chapters' names and there is only one chapter this year. That's why I broke two stars on the stability category but it's high for the rest.

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    The Secrets behind our breakup
    Teen · shinylights
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    This one is good. Story and influence are a success. I gave five stars in all categories thanks to these points. congratulations and keep going on to write, friend.

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    Flying high
    Contemporary Romance · ROOH
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    I liked the story. It is fluent and a popular one too. Adding chapter names might be more effective for the readers, I broke one star because of it but the rest points are succesful

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    Should have been better
    Teen · joondabest
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    A nice one. The characters are very talkative World background is very good. Updating frequency is good too. I enjoyed it. Congratulations to the author.

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    The Heiress Mage
    Fantasy Romance · WolfyHime_Writes
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    I marginal novel. Living as a man for many years and replacing your gender is a very different emotion changing. Congratulations to the author. Analyzing this change is very successful. Expressions of illustrating are amazing too. I bookmarked this one and waiting for the new chapters.

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    The Minds
    Fantasy Romance · drimar44
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Posted

    I am not a drama-fan. I always prefer to read action types but this one is very good. It's quite easy to read, the emotion flowing is very effective. I liked Isabella too much. I hope she gets what she deserves :) Congrats to the author. Keep going on to write pls.

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    Lies I Wish You Forgive
    Contemporary Romance · Rahmat.R
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  • KaGen
    KaGen1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Part 1 - The Day We Met
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    Lies I Wish You Forgive
    Contemporary Romance · Rahmat.R
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