thank you so much, dear Tatenda. I am trying to focus on the main story all the time and force to improve it.
thank you so much, dear friend. Yes, the story is a little unusual. It was a fiction I had modeled in my mind for three years.
yes unfortunately I have to use gore because of the way the story works but I try to keep it as limited as possible.
yes unfortunately I have to use gore because of the way the story works but I try to keep it as limited as possible. Thank you so much, mia friend.
After examining grammar on both the program and on different sites, I take care to publish it. thank you very much, friend.
yes, I worked very detailedly on the setup, but this may be considered unnecessary by the readers. so your comment made me happy.
A successful introduction to the story has been made, I experienced emotional change while reading. In the following chapters, I became much more attached to the story. A really good novel, I would like to thank the author.
rescue squad iz here, glad.
a good start. I like it. Let me drop a note. unfortunately, WN readers don't like long paragraphs, so I recommend making the paragraphs as short as possible. but I repeat, I liked it.
I want to be very clear. I've been here for a long time and have read hundreds of novels. But I have never read a novel with battle scenes illustrated in such an epic and fluent style like this! I would like to especially congratulate the author of this book. Your novel took its place at the top of my collection...
wow, MC is something different.
I was mesmerized while reading the story. It's such a fluent story that you realize you can't breathe while reading it. As an action addict, I really, really liked it. If you are looking for a story that will impress you, you are in the right place, congratulations, author.