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KaGen

KaGen

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2020-11-08 JoinedGlobal
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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to Tatenda12

    thank you so much, dear Tatenda. I am trying to focus on the main story all the time and force to improve it.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to GEEGEE

    thank you so much, dear friend.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to GomoGomo

    thank you so much, dear friend. Yes, the story is a little unusual. It was a fiction I had modeled in my mind for three years.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to Jozan

    yes unfortunately I have to use gore because of the way the story works but I try to keep it as limited as possible.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to DaoistrHC79N

    yes unfortunately I have to use gore because of the way the story works but I try to keep it as limited as possible. Thank you so much, mia friend.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to FefeAsInPepe

    :)

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to Mel_Aniv

    thank you so much, Mel_Aniv. I am really happy about your reaction and comment.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to Naphulae

    After examining grammar on both the program and on different sites, I take care to publish it. thank you very much, friend.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to _Arty007_

    yes, I worked very detailedly on the setup, but this may be considered unnecessary by the readers. so your comment made me happy.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Posted

    A successful introduction to the story has been made, I experienced emotional change while reading. In the following chapters, I became much more attached to the story. A really good novel, I would like to thank the author.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to KaGen

    and their conversation was funny

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Commented

    the names of the people in the rescue squad are interesting.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Commented

    rescue squad iz here, glad.

    "today, today, you go see something. Nobody go fit help you" the man who spoke earlier said and laughed as he saw her struggling, then he stood over her. He starts to remove his belt and is laughing while doing it, which causes the other men, some to laugh and the others to smile. The young girl keeps crying and begging them to stop but all her pleas fall on deaf ears. As the first man, sits on top her, they hear some movement in the bush. Looking to the direction of where they heard the noise from, all the men see some men approaching. The man on top of her is the first to flee, followed by the two men who were holding her legs. As the men who were holding her hands were about running, three men from the bushes came into view and grabbed them. They pushed them to the two men to the ground, then J, one of the three men helped the young girl up and pulled her aside. The other two men T and D start beating up the other two men. They stop for a while and look at them.
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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Commented

    a good start. I like it. Let me drop a note. unfortunately, WN readers don't like long paragraphs, so I recommend making the paragraphs as short as possible. but I repeat, I liked it.

    Darkness had set itself completely over the entire village of Okippa, evidence of this was the half-moon that was out and served as the source of light to the young girl who was running in the bush. Her breaths were heavy, but her fear more evident as she ran through the bush as though her life depended on it. She resisted the urge to turn back and see if the men chasing her were still there, even turning back was not necessary as she heard them run behind her too. There was one thing on her mind, it was not screaming, it was to get over to his territory. Unaware of the stone in front of her, she trips as her foot meets it but wastes no time in getting up, as time was not on her side, to her it was more than the essence, it was life! Luckily, time smiles upon her as she makes it over King's boundary.
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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Posted

    I want to be very clear. I've been here for a long time and have read hundreds of novels. But I have never read a novel with battle scenes illustrated in such an epic and fluent style like this! I would like to especially congratulate the author of this book. Your novel took its place at the top of my collection...

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Commented

    what an entrance to the story. Amazing!

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Commented

    wow, MC is something different.

    The Demon Gods have surrounded him in all directions. Utterly baffled at the numbers of the Demon Gods present to kill him. That moment was precisely the moment of humanity's last stand. Enemies exceeded him from his very being and his blood runs mortal blood. Astounded by the presence of even Higher Demon Gods to take part in his defeat.
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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Posted

    I was mesmerized while reading the story. It's such a fluent story that you realize you can't breathe while reading it. As an action addict, I really, really liked it. If you are looking for a story that will impress you, you are in the right place, congratulations, author.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Replied to KaGen

    i shivered, so good.

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  • KaGen
    KaGen5mth
    Commented

    what an end :I

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