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KaGen5mthReplied to Mel_Aniv- KaGen5mthReplied to KaGenCh 1 Chapter 1
- KaGen5mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1
- KaGen5mthCommented
rescue squad iz here, glad.
"today, today, you go see something. Nobody go fit help you" the man who spoke earlier said and laughed as he saw her struggling, then he stood over her. He starts to remove his belt and is laughing while doing it, which causes the other men, some to laugh and the others to smile. The young girl keeps crying and begging them to stop but all her pleas fall on deaf ears. As the first man, sits on top her, they hear some movement in the bush. Looking to the direction of where they heard the noise from, all the men see some men approaching. The man on top of her is the first to flee, followed by the two men who were holding her legs. As the men who were holding her hands were about running, three men from the bushes came into view and grabbed them. They pushed them to the two men to the ground, then J, one of the three men helped the young girl up and pulled her aside. The other two men T and D start beating up the other two men. They stop for a while and look at them. - KaGen5mthCommented
a good start. I like it. Let me drop a note. unfortunately, WN readers don't like long paragraphs, so I recommend making the paragraphs as short as possible. but I repeat, I liked it.
Darkness had set itself completely over the entire village of Okippa, evidence of this was the half-moon that was out and served as the source of light to the young girl who was running in the bush. Her breaths were heavy, but her fear more evident as she ran through the bush as though her life depended on it. She resisted the urge to turn back and see if the men chasing her were still there, even turning back was not necessary as she heard them run behind her too. There was one thing on her mind, it was not screaming, it was to get over to his territory. Unaware of the stone in front of her, she trips as her foot meets it but wastes no time in getting up, as time was not on her side, to her it was more than the essence, it was life! Luckily, time smiles upon her as she makes it over King's boundary. - KaGen5mthPosted
I want to be very clear. I've been here for a long time and have read hundreds of novels. But I have never read a novel with battle scenes illustrated in such an epic and fluent style like this! I would like to especially congratulate the author of this book. Your novel took its place at the top of my collection...
- KaGen5mthCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- KaGen5mthCommented
wow, MC is something different.
The Demon Gods have surrounded him in all directions. Utterly baffled at the numbers of the Demon Gods present to kill him. That moment was precisely the moment of humanity's last stand. Enemies exceeded him from his very being and his blood runs mortal blood. Astounded by the presence of even Higher Demon Gods to take part in his defeat.
