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Comments of chapter undefined of Hollywood ShowBiz Lord

yokedjaguar
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Be careful about going into past tense when it's not needed.

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MimicReads
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Its actually the animation that pulls you in in

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Muspon
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I got too say the grammer could be better there are a couple of ways of doing so for improving your grammer for example reading it out loud to yourself and after that use sites like grammerly

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Ador_Rahbar
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reading for the first time[img=recommend]

Go_F_yourself
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Do I have to unlock chapters for this novel? Or is it lie fanfic is it free

leo_wood
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diego_garcia
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ZhourongHephaestus
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It's a good start for a new one really I am amazed that author gave a hook of curiosity to read chap 2 to know about the process so I am hooked for a while I guess. Don't drop if drops fermentation of motivation will take time

BrianGallacher7
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grammar could be better and I personally dislike these starts for stories, it's better if the parents of MC have 0 way into that world. makes it more challenging for MC and interesting to read why however start with finding Nemo

MimicReads
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exp

Lackofsense
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You story is well done, its Legible and thats already a huge plus lol I like theses type of stories sadly most authors give up halfway or other issues come up. I do hope to read this till the end! Also, I believe this novel would do very well in the fan fiction section. At least more than the section its in now. Just my opinion, thank for the chapter!

MmMAaaSsSTeerr
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thanks for the chapter