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Shinobi Life!

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UchihaFanatic
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I'm the author of this fanfic. I was actually quite scared to post it at first but whatever. As a fan of the Naruto franchise I wanted to write a fanfic but at the same time I thought I might butcher it. Anyway the fanfic is a non harem, so it's only a single pairing. Also don't misunderstand, the mc doesn't have a system, just a status checker to monitor his strength or check the strengths of others. Just wanna say this is like my third fanfic, but it might not be updated often cuz I still have to write for my other 2 fics. The only reason I wrote this is because I got a sudden Idea that I couldn't get rid of even after a few weeks.

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UchihaFanatic
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Alright so I wanted to address something. Some people has been hating on the fact that I nerfed the mc by having his devil fruit abilities run on chakra... But personally I think it makes sense considering the fact that he is in the Naruto world. I don't really care much about it since this book was inspired by the novel 'The Strongest Hokage' which is about someone gaining the abilities of the Gura Gura no mi(whitebeard's devil fruit) in the naruto world. And like my fic, its mc also consumes chakra to use his devil fruit ability. SO I'm just saying, if you don't like it then this story is not for you but I won't change it. If it's not your preference then by all means drop my story. Besides I am not forcing anyone to read it aight author out.

Omipotent_reader
Omipotent_readerLv3Omipotent_reader

Has a great potential. I need more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more minutes of

Areize
AreizeLv5Areize

don't read recommend this the MC wishes are basically trash ones in Naruto world the author seems a one piece wanker if it was harem it might have a chance but now it seems garbage

Quid_the_leach
Quid_the_leachLv5Quid_the_leach

I'm going to be honest. I expected nothing, nothing at all when I headed into this. Gotta say that I got pleasantly surprised. The author managed to avoid the trap where the characters get their personalities warped to fit the story. Surprisingly, they all mostly stay true to their own character. I like the small interactions our mc has with the side characters (especially the Ino-Shika-Cho trio and Gai). It's the little things that matter. Hopefully we'll keep this pace through the novel. A lot of fanfic writers get impatient when there's a lack of action and try to rush things. Good job! Keep up the good work!

NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv13NewGoldie

Reveal spoiler

Evil_For_the_WIN
Evil_For_the_WINLv5Evil_For_the_WIN

I had too much expectations at the beginning then there was all those nerfing and shit. When I calmed down and lowered my expectations, I enjoyed it. Plus Ino is my preferred girl between Sakura, Hinata,... But I liked her behavior so her slight OOC moments are horrible for me. Also, I think I will hate MC soon enough. For now, I can recommend it.

crazy_son
crazy_sonLv4crazy_son

I don't really give reviews to ffs so this is new to me but here we go. I have read till chap 6 and I think that should be enough to get interested in a ff or a story really but I am not getting any good vibe from this so I have given it 3 stars in writing quality it would have been higher if he didn't make those petty mistakes in the beginning and ****ed up powerscaling was written better and the MC wasn't nerfed... the story dev got 2 cause cause well the story isn't original and he didn't really change anything that much the story didn't change that much even though there is a new character involved in the plot... character design is 1 cause well you get the point and the oc didn't have a design that stands out... world back ground is 2 cause it might get better there is potential... update stability has not been seen here since the day of dawn... p.s: I didn't hate it but it is too generic and I think it will be a waste of time if I read anymore Soo bye...thanks for an alright read.

lycke
lyckeLv10lycke

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

Avarice_of_Greed
Avarice_of_GreedLv11Avarice_of_Greed

It's alright so far. I thought it would be generic at first because of the whole guy meets being that gives you wishes trope, but I was surprised that I enjoyed it. A few errors here and there but all around readable, hopefully the quality doesn't drop.

RoseAmber
RoseAmberLv13RoseAmber

I enjoyed reading this until it was dropped. it's not completed like it says on the page, so if you read this be prepared to be upset when it just stops.

EANID
EANIDLv4EANID

This is much better than your other fics, better would be to concentrate on this one in my opinion, but its u who is author. But I really like this one as for now!! Keep it up!!

luckky25
luckky25Lv4luckky25

WHY AUTHOR-SAMA WHYYY DO YOU TORTURE US MORTALS LIKE THIS, BLESS US WITH UPDATE OH DEAR AUTHOR-SAMA WE BESEECH YOU.

SmilingReader99
SmilingReader99Lv14SmilingReader99

Great novel so far, as long as you don't make the MC completely OP before he even reaches the start of shippuden than I can see this novel having some longevity

sleepy_chan
sleepy_chanLv3sleepy_chan

i didnt read it yet but here 5 stars cuz i want somethig from you :) mind sharing the cover pic uwuwuuwuwuwuwu .

shifuufufuuud
shifuufufuuudLv4shifuufufuuud

The author is probably dead because of COVID.......RIP author I hope your reincarnated with three wishes......you will be remembered forever😭

3hadow
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honestly its a really good fanfic unlike what some people say better than alot of the trash fanfics out there and i dont think the mc is nerfed he is even quit strong you can say being a high level chunin as a someone who just graduated is really good and as his jonin teacher said he is only lacking experience and with enough experience he can be as strong as any jonin. but the update stability isn't really good to be honest but i gave it 5 star anyway cause i didnt want to bring down the overall rating cause its already quit low for a fanfic as good as this one honestly alot of people just rate it one star without even reading it and just bring up stupid reasons that doesn't make sense for the rating they gave to try and justify it.

Shubhamtripathi033
Shubhamtripathi033Lv13Shubhamtripathi033

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good 👌 👍 👍 👌 👍 ☺️ 👌 👍👌 😌👍👍 👍😊👌 👍😊☺️😊😊😊👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Bruce_Banner_4897
Bruce_Banner_4897Lv3Bruce_Banner_4897

Great story so far.

Teltara
TeltaraLv13Teltara

great book it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooood the funny thing is that every time maito guy says yound shigeo i think young shield hero hahahahah