Aislinn_Jasper
Hey there reader! It's the author giving a 5/5 rating to my novel ×D Well, I wanted to say that when you see this novel in the fantasy male leading genre then it doesn't mean that, “That the Mc was Reborn into a cultivation world and has this awesome power or talent in a world of bad people and he starts to clean up his sect... And all that happens in Chapter 4 already" So, please don't judge it that way as it has a lot more fresh and nice plot to provide. So....I'm looking forward to the love the readers might give to this novel as it has a lot of my imagination, hard work and ofc a lot of editing. So, please give it a try :) I hope you won't regret giving this novel a little bit of your time! Thanks for choosing this novel...
So first of all, the synopsis was great. It got me hooked and it told me what to see throughout the book. The chapters were well written although there were some grammatical errors in them. But I do believe that with this experience the author can learn and can improve. This book is worth it to read so PLEASE DO READ IT!! Hoping for your success author <3
Good opening to the story. Parts of the early chapters pull you right into the action, and there's a steady pace along the way. Some parts are told a bit to fast, and there are some parts that could have been shown instead of told, but it's a good start. Best of luck author, the steady updates you got is on point so I hope you continue this and finish it as well.
I loved your prologue, it had me hooked to the story while the synopsis didn't paint a clear picture to what I am getting myself into. As such writing quality is much better than most of WN stories so yeah!! story development feels a little disjointed but it all comes together nicely in later parts. I loved the character designs and the world build. Good job. All the best. [EVERYONE GIVE IT A READ]