Good opening to the story. Parts of the early chapters pull you right into the action, and there's a steady pace along the way. Some parts are told a bit to fast, and there are some parts that could have been shown instead of told, but it's a good start. Best of luck author, the steady updates you got is on point so I hope you continue this and finish it as well.
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