Comments of chapter undefined of Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life

Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life

sagorika_adhikari

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Darlene_VirginiaLv4Darlene_Virginia

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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SolAceLv3SolAce

Nice start, but the grammar does need some improving !

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kyle_irishLv2kyle_irish

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Shinhwa112Lv13Shinhwa112

Guessing the ML is the robot talking to the doctor on the phone

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lazylynLv10lazylyn

interesting

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nishiduraniLv2nishidurani

I will

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nishiduraniLv2nishidurani

oh I am waiting to know about the phone call

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ShilohDLv5ShilohD

Good

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itsmeayezLv12itsmeayez

like! definitly a like!! 👍🏻👍🏻

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Yajaira_Ramirez_4324Lv13Yajaira_Ramirez_4324

Gran capitulo es geñial

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Henrique_PaiaoLv6Henrique_Paiao

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Fierce_EyesLv3Fierce_Eyes

Nice start 👍👍👍👍

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Fierce_EyesLv3Fierce_Eyes

Nice start 👍👍👍👍

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Aislinn_JasperLv3Aislinn_Jasper

Nice start keep going author you're doing great!!

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DaoistZcYl4CLv3DaoistZcYl4C

🤗☺😊🥰😍😘

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Bunny_SLLv2Bunny_SL

Hmm hmm, good Chapter with a slow paced story and nice details. Some grammatical issues but nothing major.

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Rafia_A_RowshniLv2Rafia_A_Rowshni

Interesting start of the book

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KanatoMukamiLv1KanatoMukami

The beginning was nice and slow. I felt like her, waking up slowly and still learning her surroundings. But after the phone call it felt rushed and I got kind of confused. But it was not bad. Good job! [img=recommend]

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Prince_nonchalantLv3Prince_nonchalant

I like the way you use your words. It somewhat seems like an official author in my opinion ngl. Kinda complex but easily digested.💯

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sagorika_adhikariAuthorsagorika_adhikari

Readers, please leave a review or comments to help this new author understand and grow.

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TheIllusionistLv10TheIllusionist

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

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