Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon In The Multiverse

So, the MC create a dungeon that anyone can enter, the dungeon is a tower the size of an island and extremely tall that allow people to train and grow stronger. In less that a week the WG would already lock it down destroying his ship that is outside, if any of his crew got out they die... That is the most useless thing to have, it would have been better if it was similar to ID create from the gamer where he can invite someone to his party and enter with them.

Why do Novels go from Good to Bad in an instant ? Because that's the case here

This dungeon thingy went in a completely unnecessery and wrong directsions..

hopefully other people don't enter it

the dungeon is bad though, making it go public is dumb, it should be private but can invite people and give the same as it would if public, the whole public thing is what i find really dumb...

The Author thought to himself: "These Power Stones are so annoying, how can I make them stop?"

Thanks for the great chapter, the public dungeon is really dumb it’s too big and the girls could get lost for months plus their ship is exposed for anyone to steal.

Thanks for the chapter. Get Nami!

separated from his women by his own purchase. bad choice author. not too bad if they can track each other while not together and the distance isn't hundreds or thousands of kilometers between them.

If hakai can die in the first floor if he isn't careful then what about the other girls they aren't too strong and you even make them separate from hakai so, can you tell how the hell are they gonna survive alone when they don't even know basic observation haki and armament haki??

Thanks for the chapter. Don't drop. felt like .25 of a chapter.

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Thanks for the chapter. You're doing well. keep up the good work. some suggesting : I know for the story to progress you need some hard work to do. if the mc gets everything from the start it gets bland. But sometimes You're limiting the mc. I wont talk about the wishes cuz they are your idea and you can work around them to creat your story. Lets talk about the 1 year world travel. I just might be only me who doesn’t get it. Is the mc limited to a world for 1 year or he has the option to travel to another world after 1 year. Next is just a thought. You see our mc can't read the ponygliph. But he has a system. So you know what i mean. And some might say if he knows how to read whats the point of having robin.. to them i say.... Robins a waifu.. yeah suck it. And there are more but those are not to important but the last one.. THE DUNGEON. Wtf were you smoking 🤨 You know, it will make the whole world crazy. Pirates,marines,bounty hunters or heck it might even create a new group called adventures. I see the point you're saying about the public dungeon. If he needs to get strong he need stronger monster. Its all good and all. But what about others. Some might drop the novel cuz of this single reason. But i believe in you. Hope you will make this dungeon thingy right as why spend points in creating something that will make your enemy stronger. Heck i would even say ussop will go to the dungeon to get strong and kick his ass. I've some ideas about this but It's not my novel its yours. I'm reading this cuz i enjoy Your ideas. Hope to read more. Good luck and stay safe.

thanks for the chapter

thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter