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i thought mc is a bit like sasuke. . in the end he is just a boy who is controlled by a girl. . i mean ino in this story is annoying same as sakura in the anime. . she keep tobi here, tobi there. . i dont mean to critic author, but i as a man who annoyed when woman soo clingy to me dont like this girl (ino) in this story. . i dont like when mc had no voice over his opinion. . btw, this is a good story