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aswalzz

aswalzz

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Im so cool. .

2017-09-01 JoinedMalaysia
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    hmmmm. . its better if he command him to kill himself. . sighh

    Ch 74 [Uchiha Madara!]
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Version_401
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    great story but all i read is mc status. . can author just write what skill, level, mc stat etc that change in a simple way rather than write all of them then repeat it again n again. . just write mc full status at the end of the chapter ulif u want to satisfy yourself to write mc full status. .

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Zombie Paladin!
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    Reincarnated as Issei with a Gamer System(DROPPED)
    Anime & Comics · ShaggyJoestar69
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    wow. . mc x sasuke, clap3

    Ch 31 Anchor Vatican
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    Naruto: The Outsider {Dropped}
    Anime & Comics · Nechrom
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    15 days without update. . please dont drop this author san. .

    Ch 42 Tsunade’s Training
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    Reborn as strongest In Naruto world
    Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    author please decide what mc be called in this story. . hatake yeruashi or erase? please slect one of them instead of using both. .i got irritated reading this. .n 1 more, please fix grammar. . there are too many typo or missing letter. .

    Ch 25 Chapter 25
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    Naruto: Time control
    Anime & Comics · Gunitlo
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    yeah that was some cool badass moment for mc. . but i think he should not do like that. . bcoz ur is already saved, n the kingdom destroyed is his fault. . furthermore he is leading happy life with his harem. . mc is so petty. . dont he realize at tht time gray is just a kid. . he is also a person who are transmigrated n mc also is a lawyer. .so he should have a better brain to make decision. . i can accept that he want to forgot his past, but. . .sighh. . whatever. .

    Ch 118 Settle The Past 2
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    Chairman of The Magic Council
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    sigh. . ripping clothes? duh. . everytime they do hot activity they rip clothes? or rather mc ripped her clothe. . i cannot imagine how many clothe are ripped already. .

    Ch 218 No longer necessary
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    Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Evil_Dragon
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    yeah,u are right author. . your ninja romantic harem comedy is totally shit. .

    Ch 16 My Ninja Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, As I Expected
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    The Legend of the Kyubi
    Anime & Comics · GenoXX
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    thats y weak woman is a burden at the same time she will make u in paradise. .

    Ch 30 Iron Blood Wyvern
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    Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
    Fantasy · wintermist1994
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    keep it up author

    Ch 129 125. A New Mission
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    one of the most hated trait of mc, arriving late in action. .

    Ch 107 105. Attack On Uchiha Part-5
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Replied to aswalzz

    well, i dont care for your mistake about foreshadowing but i dont agree your statement about human habit to repeat mistake. . we learn from our mistake, thats y we get more mature. . but if u repeat it, the it is a waste for god to give u a brain. .

    Ch 91 89. Shikkotsu Forest Part-1
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    habit to repeat mistake? .then that was stupid,. if u repeating mistake becme habit then just bash your head and feed your brain to the dog. .

    Ch 91 89. Shikkotsu Forest Part-1
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    thank u author. . u are so handsome. . i apologize for my word. . i thought kushina and minato die same in canon story. . i dont care about the sin or whatever. . i just dont want them to die, they are so pitiful. .their son had just born, and they die. . im sad when i watch in anime naruto true parent. .

    Ch 74 74. A New Jinchuruki
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    damn u author. . in the end this is the same as the canon. . fak u

    Ch 73 73. The Unknown Assailant
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    damn u author. .. u spoil this story. . i thought he will save minato and kushina. . damn u

    Ch 72 72. Nine-Tails attack Part-2
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    hmmmm. . mc is so stupid that i have an urge to beat him. . y dont use the 'cheat' skill in naruto world jutsu. . **** him . . please realize the ultimate cheat clone technique. .

    Ch 61 Medical Ninjutsu Training Part-1
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    one fact author write for medical is true in real world. . hahahaha. . every doctor i meet, i dont even understand what they write on the paper. . but im confuse how the worker in farmacy can understand the calighrapy writing of doctor. . hahahahahaaha. . maybe they also write like doctor. . so every medical student have their own calighrapy. . hahaha

    Ch 26 26. Fuinjutsu Training
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    damn u author. . u keep nerfing mc then buff him a bit but keep nerfing him for longer time. .

    Ch 60 Otsuki Kaguya
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    Reincarnated In Naruto [Naruto Fan-Fic]
    Anime & Comics · Heaven_Sage
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  • aswalzz
    aswalzz1yr
    Commented

    i thought mc is a bit like sasuke. . in the end he is just a boy who is controlled by a girl. . i mean ino in this story is annoying same as sakura in the anime. . she keep tobi here, tobi there. . i dont mean to critic author, but i as a man who annoyed when woman soo clingy to me dont like this girl (ino) in this story. . i dont like when mc had no voice over his opinion. . btw, this is a good story

    Ch 33 [The Dungeon: Remnants of the massacre!! Part -1]
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Version_401
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