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1. Among all Paths listed without any connection to a Venerable (*Blade Path, Bone Path, Cloud Path, Dark Path, Emotion Path, Enchantment Path, Fire Path, Ice Path, Illusion Path, Information Path, Light Path, Lightning Path, Metal Path, Moon Path, Phantom Path, Pill Path, Restriction Path, Shadow Path, Snow Path, Sound Path, Sword Path, Water Path, Weapon Path, Wind Path*), which combination of two would you choose?- Morty7564832dCommented
I wish Red Sea Ancestor became a Venerable at his time, the guy is Gol D Rodger of Gu world.
3. Who do you think, in the original story, are the closest people to becoming Venerable? (after fate was destroyed, and it became possible) - Morty7564835dCommentedCh 24 **Chapter 24: Death Refinement**
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I don’t remember exactly, but does it really matter what thoughts he infused into Gu during its creation? I thought that if the Gu is called Poisonous Thought, it could be used for all kinds of purposes, poison your own thoughts, enslave someone, etc. Like a general purpose Gu, without the need to create a new one?
Ch 23 **Chapter 23: Thought Poison** - Morty7564835dCommented
How did he get it? I thought he got the Healing Gu because he was 3rd?
Liquor Worm Gu Rank 1 - Morty7564836dCommented
Soul path actually sounds amazing, almost on par with Time path
"The next to go is the Soul Path + Killing Path, just because it is too aggressive and has too few other use cases." - Morty7564836dCommented
It’s the path of the first strongest Venerable, right?
*Qi Path* - Morty7564836dCommented[This cheat gives you the ability that you never have to feed your Gu, or to be more specific, any Gu that you keep in your Aperture does not have to be fed unless you want to.]
- Morty7564839dCommentedCh 7 7: Loss and Gain
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I don’t see any problems with sharing it
NZT-48 was an option but I refrained from sharing that item. For now, it was my main trump card and was something I planned on keeping a secret for a long while. - Morty75648310dCommented
Thanks for the chapter, but it needs some serious editing. Also, for a person who did not watch RWBY this arc is very confusing, and I feel like you are skipping huge chanks of a plot. In the previous chapter MC helped this Phyrra and everything was fine, she was safe, this chapter starts with her already being half dead somewhere battling someone else.
Ch 23 Chapter 23: Final Battle - Morty75648310dCommented
Again, she hired killers to off you and was loyal to Luthor, and you did not even fire her?
"Have you seen her glare? I think if it were up to her, she would tear us apart on the spot. Mercy clearly doesn't like us very much. Maybe she and Lex had a relationship." - Morty75648310dCommentedCh 12 Chapter 12: Dead
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Ring? What ring? Was it mentioned before?
"How did you cheat? Did you pretend to faint and escape the magical test?" Damian turned his head toward a ring hanging around his neck. - Morty75648310dCommented
No one talks like that. ‘Eagerly waiting’?
"Mark!" she exclaimed, rising from her seat. "You're here! I've been eagerly waiting to discuss your new project." - Morty75648311dCommented
I usually don’t understand these dialogues in the chapters. Like in this case, what did she mean?
"Hm... I guess that makes sense. Wait no, I couldn't relate." A strange glint flashed in Olga's eyes as Nicholas turned her way in horror, "The Ani-..." - Morty75648311dCommented
Again?
[A few years back ]