Reviews of Pokemon - A real story

Five stars just cause' of Author's quote............................................................God damn the word count just does'nt fill

maybe its just preference but this novel basically ticked every red flag for me.. the author actually implements chinese cultivation nonsense into the novel; he nicknames his pokemon; mc joins a family/clan (a huge financial decision with basically no thought or preparation); every pokemon of his gets lamer and lamer with the exception of charizard (basically bug and rat pokemon). and every second sentence in the novel is cringe af

There are several major issues with this novel. First, how can it be called a 'realistic take on Pokemon when he has a system? (don't believe the description is a major focus in the novel). Second, the MC has crazy luck his first Pokemon has high talent despite being a 'random' selection it even has strong egg moves. Third, the MC's Pokemon find it easy to learn moves despite him doing nothing special with their training. Fourth, the MC was supposably a researcher for a lab when he was a kid, surely he would've been given a sponsorship by them if he was such a genius. Fifth, the MC acts like a child despite having memories of reincarnation. Sixth, at times there is wuxia and xianxia style writing which feels out of place, e.g. he was called a country bumpkin and crowds commentate fights with pointless and unrealistic dialogue. Look I know it's just fanfic and this is Webnovel so as a reader you're not exactly looking for gold but even the name of it is misleading so would not recommend it.

Hello readers, author there. This is my first time writing a light novel. I wrote a chapter just now and will update it if u guys are interested. Off course it will take some time to get updated as i have to write few advanced chapter for rainy days.. This is my realistic world of pokemon.. so comment bellow

Nicknames their Pokémon and had the chance for any region Pokémon for his starter but the author gave the MC a Nidoran… one of the most common Pokémon in Kanto.

Hey everyone.. author here. This novel may be halted for few weeks. My laptop had some serious problems... and all the saved chapters have been destroyed. I now dont have time to repair my laptop cause of my exams and work. So i can only publish it after sometime. And unfortunately, one cannot publish chapter via mobile devices... so appoligies

The world background Is good but mc is Dumb despite being a reincarnated person...............................................................

Very good and interesting. Felt like I too was in the world of Pokémon. Everyone who are fans of Pokémon should definitely read this novel as its like we ourselves are inside it and are like catching Pokémon and going to the journey

It's great, go it a read, you won't regret it. Unless you're a special little snowflake. .................................... . ....................................

Hey guys, Author here. This novel has crossed 100 chap in pat-reon, and I m pleased about it. After reading a lot of your comments I came to realize that there are a lot of grammatical mistakes in the first chapters. This happened cause, this was my first novel and I had no experience. but fear not, I would be editing those chapters really soon. Hope you guys would bear with me and enjoy the novel. Thank you

I gave this a shot, despite the summary ticking off so many red-flags. "Realistic" fics all that tend to throw themselves into the angst and never really leave for no freaking reason. While this isn't quite that bad, it does (as other reviewers have said) have an excessive level of cultivation elements (and while I enjoy the occassional cultivation fic, I'm not reading Pokemon fics for that). Not to say that there aren't those who will enjoy some of the things that are offered, but it just didn't reach the bar of quality for me to enjoy.

This author has taken an really interesting approach to the Pokémon world I really feel like the chapter's are gonna be amazing.✌️✌️✌️🔥 Good work dude.

Look I gave it a long preview, but in the first 10 chapters, I can probably count the number of grammatically correct sentences on one hand. Anything beyond what you’d find on a Pokémon wiki is completely Half—- Most of the narration reads like a childrens book. Somethings are just messed up, like an instance of the protagonist sneaking meat into a vegitarians meal. I’ll give it ten more chaps at some point when it doesn’t feel like a torturous waste of time.

More updates really and writing quality needs to be improved sjjdskkfkdksjdjdjjdjdjfjfjsjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjfjfjfjdnsjdkwkwoqodkekaifkejdif

A very good and intresting story , im amazed nobody is voting for it Keep it up and more chapters please

I gave this novel an overal rating of 5.. just for the heck of it. Always been a fannnn of pokemon world and i always read pokemon fanfiction.. i thnk it is going to be better than "journey towards greatnes" Do you have patreon of this novel? There are very less chapter for it in here.

A good novel with realistic views just as the ritle says. Hope this pokemon novel will be good. I have not come across any good pokemon novel. The grammar is also pretty good for a fanfiction novel. It is readable. Good luck author . Hope u update it regularly.

It's a regular adaptation, have more chinese fic than Pokemon traditional story, is good, but is heavy read 30 caps about Venu Family and Axel travel in this, MC is a Good Guy, and nothing more, i feel the history has potential but. Sometimes the point of being a "Realistic" story is lost by creating concepts, stories, etc., it is not at the level of a 12 year old on Wattpad, but I feel that there are things that can be developed or written better, I will still read this thing, but because I want to know who Brine is, anyway, I give it a 6/10, it's better than Master of Tactics in my opinion, but please, don't put so many things or references from chinese culture novels.

The name of this FF is quite ironic as it butchers through the world design of Pokemon implementing the author's own world rules (Chinese pill system, clans[fck venu family arc], Pokemon core, etc.) this is nothing but unreal from the Pokemon world's point of view. The author makes a grave mistake by removing the freedom of the Poke world, there are way too many conditions for a lot of things that don't exist in the original Pokemon world like the restrictions to get an egg. It's quite disappointing, to be honest.

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