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Despite after replacing all the previous chapters of the novel, the author has succeeded in creating a marvellous and fabulous system novel with a scifi genre. Writing Quality: Really nice. excellent. Story Development: As I mentioned above the author has replaced the chapters because of a certain reason that is why we readers might find the earlier chapters short but believe me you will get immerse in the story to read more. Cole gets a Vision system which opens the door of many mysteries in the story. Not gonna spoil it here. Do check this story and believe me you will gonna enjoy it. Keep up with the good work, dear author.
[ E X C E L L E N T ] A very good read, the story is so good and well written. Grammar is beyond decent as I hardly found any errors in the book. What I love most about this book is no dragging plot, the story is realistic so we can relate. Both ML and FL are refreshing and interesting characters. FL is so cool and not a pushover and I really like her character, I just hope both of them can work out on their misunderstanding asap. So far the smut scenes were so hot! But I think you don't need to censor the moaning cursing words on their love making. Oh also, maybe you can try to write the smut scene from Male pov, it would be great for male readers (shameless me ๐ค) Story : ๐๐๐๐๐ Male lead : ๐๐๐๐๐ Female lead : ๐๐๐๐๐ Smut : ๐๐๐๐๐ Overall : ๐๐๐๐๐