I_Am_Soh
I hope you don’t back out since it’s literally a good start atm. And also your novel about Naruto is literally one of the best Naruto fan-fictions I’ve ever read tbh. Btw Baki and other martial arts anime fanfic are rare these days and I hope you don’t give up just because it’s long or weird or ****. No dawg, you do your thing and if you like then keep going and don’t stop and ignore the criticism.
Writing Quality: 5 - Nice Stability of Updates: 3 - welp... Idk what happened to this story but hasn't been updated for a long time... Story Development: 4 - Reincarnation as tradition 😂 BUT this one is peculiar, a sinful guy dies and meets devil and he literally makes a pact with him so he can have a second life, its a good approach to the story, what threw me off was the tail thing... but thats ok for now, there is not much story yet so i await for ur return. Character Design: 3- no comments here... World Background : 3 -no comments here... total score: 3.6 All in all, I do appreciated the approaches u have when doing ur thing, I would love to see u doing a dbz fanfic or a more strategic one like code geass, attack on titan, or even fairy tail ! but please don't drop this novel, or at least open a patreon or a group on discord were we can discuss and share ideas to improve the fanfics ! thanks for showing ur work !
Damn Its pretty Good it has good development and its pretty smooth of how the story flowed btw will you make karura a love interest or harem? will you save emi?(fukada jk) \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥