webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of Holy World

altalt

Holy World

EmpRabbit

Chapter comments6

Author liked the comment.

SmilingPerson
SmilingPersonLv3SmilingPerson

I was going to point out several inconsistensies in the first chap but I held back and now after reading chap 2, I'm glad I held back. nice premise author, I will be following this novel.

3yr
1
EmpRabbit
EmpRabbitAuthorEmpRabbit

Glad to hear that! Please do tell what you found unpleasant in the first chap so that i can improve in the future. I always appreciate comments with suggestions!

3yr
Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

3yr
1
Login