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Very nicely written story with good character design. It has a decent world background, the only issue being that regions/mechanisms are introduced whenever it seems convenient for the MC. I can't say much about the updating stability as it is very consistent. As for story development, I think there are too many plotlines to follow at the same time. Earlier plotlines are being unnecessarily dragged out, while newer ones keep being introduced. This ends with the reader being confused and frustrated as MC keeps jumping from one plotline to another. Overall: Ok for a nice binge but not good for long term consumption.
it's fine man. dont beat yourself up over it. Writing is hard and a general planning is important. good luck to you.
That's a fine thing, to have daily releases. I would also not have mass releases if that brings the uncertainity of Kevin disappearing. Also KevinAscending, dont pay too much attention to all the people shouting for mass release and attacking you for not explaining your reasons. I would say just make sure that you keep true to the spirit of cultivation that is **Paragon of Sin**.