SilentMild
All I could say from this story is 'amazing'. Just from the word itself left a big impact on how the author narrated it clearly. It is beyond perfection. I tell you, readers. From the initial chapters, it's already goddamn intriguing... and I could tell that they're more challenges that will unfold as the story goes on. Reccomend it for all. An amazing read, really.
The story has a nice feel to it and I can feel that it is as good as the King Avatar! I wish that there will be a POV on the other team in the earlier chapter to discuss their roles. Then the story will be most perfect. But then, the author moves on straight to the tournament instead of the boring POV which may slow down the pace. So I actually have no complains. Good story, keep up the good work author!
WARGROUNDS is a work of fiction by SilentMild. The audience of this work are fans of games that has battlegrounds, weapons, and powers. As a man born during the 80s, I'm not fond of these kind of game inspiration novels but reading one was kinda fun, I've got to admit. The major flaw I found was that a ton of characters were introduced right off the start, especially chapter one and chapter two. Repetitive usage of the common dialogue tag, "said" could also be seen throughout. If I were to give a suggestion, it would be best to replace "said" with some sort of emotion to further elaborate the feelings of the characters. I can't say much, since again, I'm not born in this kind of era. I'm not used to playing these kinds of games, but then again, I enjoyed reading it. As for other flaws, I found some grammar mistakes but they are only a few. -Dann Giovanni
I'm not really a fan of reading MMORPG theme or any game novels. I read a few chapters and I find the story interesting. The writing quality is good and so is the stability of updates. The story is developing nicely. The Character design as well as the world background are well defined. The novel has a good potential. It is a re write of an earlier contracted novel. All the best,author!
I like it, like it, like it! That's all I can say. From the first chapter this story has captured my heart, and I'll gladly continue reading it! Characters are very three-dimensional, some you can sympathize with, some not. The world background is seriously cool, if not a little dark, but that's the charm that enraptured me. To be honest, the first chapter felt like a delusional dream, and I loved it! I want more!
A well done MMORPG concept. Author knows their stuff, I'm guessing that they have been playing games for years to no end. The details and basic knowledge are presented well enough for me to grasp the experience like I'm playing the game myself. This is coming from someone who is ten chapters in, so I don't know how the story will progress in the future. I like these types of stories, so there's a high chance that I will be watching out for future updates. Keep up the good work, author!
I have read King's Avatar before so when I started reading your story, it really reminded me of that reading experience. It is really good. The story is perfectly written and seems to be in sync so far. Although it is a very early review, I must say that your story has high potential. Keep up the good work. :)
A great novel with a compelling story, characters and action that's described very well. Unfortunately, I'm not really a fan of reading game novels, partially cause I enjoy playing games more than reading. But despite that, I still managed to enjoy the reading, not only was the plot intriguing, the characters were well done and very much like some gamers I know.