WARGROUNDS is a work of fiction by SilentMild. The audience of this work are fans of games that has battlegrounds, weapons, and powers. As a man born during the 80s, I'm not fond of these kind of game inspiration novels but reading one was kinda fun, I've got to admit.
The major flaw I found was that a ton of characters were introduced right off the start, especially chapter one and chapter two. Repetitive usage of the common dialogue tag, "said" could also be seen throughout. If I were to give a suggestion, it would be best to replace "said" with some sort of emotion to further elaborate the feelings of the characters.
I can't say much, since again, I'm not born in this kind of era. I'm not used to playing these kinds of games, but then again, I enjoyed reading it. As for other flaws, I found some grammar mistakes but they are only a few.
-Dann Giovanni