Since every reviews is positive and I have nothing more positive to say I think I need to say the negative side to balance it out. My first issue with the early chapters was the numbers of characters being introduced. Readers will have a hard time to track each characters and I dont even think that it was necessary to name the organizer. Not to mention the characters also had alias characters in the game. Second the fight scenes lacked any weight on them, the members just cast skills without any explanation on how they will affacts their targets. In video game novels I've read they specify the attack damage and such and their description, well it does to some extent but its done rarely. I think it will leave the readers confused to add characters without proper introduction. Most of them wrre not even fleshed out I dont know which character were on which teams, or much of their personality the only one I could remember was Lidar. I find it odd in the championship, Aildren will just abandon the game because he felt something was off with his necklace, I mean his parents could be just somewhere though. I think it was a plot device that were not done very well. Because from what I read the news was declared after the Aildren was in as stupor. He should have prioritized the game first before the odd feeling on his necklace. Regarding the trials I didnt feel any tension the MC just casted the skills and.mobbed down the puppets. We have no idea how much skills he had, or how much mana he drained. I think i find that asoect a bit lacking. Also he did once almost felt some threat but he was saved by his father, and were able to cast a skill that killed them in an instant. The romance in this I think will feel will be somewhat forced, its onething to admire someone u treat as celebrity but with Aildren as he is now, I think it was too kind for the Landlady to even give him a free rent, she became those typical female side char who worships the MC. I think few chapters in, there was a development its a good thing, but I feel it was forced why he would turm into a complete unproductive neet just because his parents died. I would understand if his parents died because of him playing video games, that would give him a complete reason to stop, but I find no connection with it, they just went to get some grocery. You could say he was depressed thus he did all those stuffs but since he's a gamer shouldnt video games be his leeway to cure his depression? Not only that he also abandoned his team. Just my opinion, might be wrong IDK, dont take it heart since you asked for my honest opinion in the forum.
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good points, thanks bro.
