Reviews of Nonn

I kinda like your story so far and I would really like to know what inspired you to write this. But I can't see how the future plot line progresses. Add lots of hidden plot line if you can. Then your story will become a puzzle that fits perfectly. Good job so far.

Ok I'll be honest with you. I recommend you review your work before uploading it. Make sure your grammar and capitalization are correct. Also when constructing a sentence make sure nit to make it longer. Your reader will be confused if so. Try making it more short or at least contains 15 words at most. Now about the plot, it's really great. Romance is not my thing but I like how you made this story. I hope you continue writing and improve more and more

I liked reading your book. There are many grammatical errors but they can be fixed after going through the book once. The chapters are lengthy and the story progresses really slow. You can work on that. The writing style and plot is good though.

I am in love with your characters especially the twins. I love their relationship. I wish I could have such kind of a relationship with my siblings. I like the flow of the story. It keeps you thinking of what will happen next. So far good 😌. Please keep updating.

Good day. Here is the author, I'm sorry for the delay I currently just finished signing a contract with web novel and another link was created with the current updates. I want to thank you readers for everything all the reviews from critics to encouragement it made me improve in so many aspect. Below is the new link where the new chapters are being uploaded. Please keep supporting. https://***.webnovel.com/book/stay'_18571970306339205

How can you say if someone is staying or not? You can feel it if you love someone so much! Maybe if you are still hurting from a heartbreak, this is a good read!

Like your novel. It is already interesting but there are still few so looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work. This has potential.