Avi22Nash
These reviews don't really make sense because the story is not yet finished, but this is my initial rate for the author to show my support. Keep up the great work, and I hope that you can see this story through the end. Cheers! Also, you need to improve your grammar and structure, so you could give justice to the time of your supporters. If you're interested, I could use some of your help too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged).