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mssuigeneris
mssuigenerisLv3mssuigeneris

Overall, a great Utopian/Dystopian sci-fi thriller, depending on your perspective. I'm getting Psycho-Pass vibes here and it seriously piques my curiosity. Great world-building, gives you a vivid imagery of what 3019 is like. If I have a suggestion, please divide your paragraphs more often to give your readers a breather. Cheers!

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TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv2TaintedMetal

Overall, this is a story that has very good use of imagery. You can feel the characters situation and the future here is presented very nicely. Aspects of the future are clearly shown, and for me the showing aspect here is this story's strongest point.

kdhoundiyal27
kdhoundiyal27Lv1kdhoundiyal27

It's just magnificently written and explained šŸ’«. Hands off to you such beautifully presented that it really took me there ā£ļøBig FanšŸ”„ And after reading it all it quite seems to be like that you have by yourself visited marsšŸ˜… . Really brilliant work done my best wishes are with you always.

Joseph_Percol
Joseph_PercolLv2Joseph_Percol

Futuristic imagination, I like the way the author describe how future will be, actually I have the same kind of story iā€™m not yet publishing, iā€™ll keep reading this.. Keep it up!

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