shrEk2o3
Hello, author here. Hehe. Anyway, just a disclaimer, this novel is on hiatus for a brief time, I will need to make improvements on the chapters and also find loopholes (lmao). I hope you continue to support this novel until the end. And for any queries, suggestions, you can contact me in discord:shrEk2o3 (LaLuna)#4642 and also join this server: https://discord.gg/WmbdPEbP ARIGATO :))
A detective like adventure finding out whose's X, and trying to solve who's the big baddie. And I'm guessing... The Female Protagonist will marry... Marcus? Anyways, I read the first chapter, and you did a good job. The only thing that needs some work... Is the title I guess. That's my honest opinion. Great work.
I've just come across your book and may I just say I'm in love with your writing, very straight to the point, and very good. Reading your writing is an inspiration for me. I still have a long way to go to be able to write that neatly. It makes the readers enjoy reading your book. Your storyline is great too. Thumbs up!
The sci-fi world model, that's the first thing which makes me astounded in this novel. Then comes the character design. they are all so well described and are straight to the point. The twists and turns I the plot also makes it more intriguing and keeps the readers on three toes in anticipation. The author understands the fact that a detective story needs to be fast-paced and he did a really good job in writing this novel. P.S. if you are slow on uptake then take your time reading it and don't be in a hurry to cast it off. This book is really good.