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VITALITY [BL]

Ascending_Darkness

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Undying_Ghost
Undying_GhostLv14Undying_Ghost

I really like this book. I actually wish the author had more works to read while waiting for updates. The style is easy to read but not to simplistic. The characters are flawed in ways that humanize them. There is a fair amount of 'bad' language however, though I personally swear way too much myself so I actually appreciate it and I feel that sometimes adding 'swear' words adds realism to characters or conversations.

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VeoAno
VeoAnoLv2VeoAno

Haven't read it yet but the plot seems promising. But still hesitating though since it hasn't been updated lately and i don't feel like reading an incomplete story that has no updates.

ShayLynn_Williams
ShayLynn_WilliamsLv15ShayLynn_Williams

I really like this book so far. couldn't put it down till I got to last chapter produced so far. Looking forward to more😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Honomushi_Licht
Honomushi_LichtLv1Honomushi_Licht

Awesome story! I ready love the MC's personality and his really close bond with his brother!❤ Great job author-sama! The character designs and development were flawless!

CoffeePot
CoffeePotLv11CoffeePot

i want to start of by saying thank you to the author for writing this, it's a fantastic story so far and I'm really looking forward to how it progresses. secondly, I want to apologize for skipping over this novel several times during my hunt for new omegaverse novels, it deserves way more recognition than it gets and i hope it gets it soon. The story it self is progressing nicely, and the characters are both believable and fleshed out. I especially like that while yuliang is certainly a loud mouth annoying brat(not without good reason), he has a softer side, and how through the writing it's shown that acting like he does isn't necessarily a good thing. thanks again for the novel, and i hope this review motivates you too keep writing more awesome chapters. **: maybe changing the synopsis and or the picture can help reele people in

Obsidian_Light
Obsidian_LightLv15Obsidian_Light

Absolutely love the characters, My Favorite thing about this is the main character he is a badas* but shows some vulnerability when it matters most ❤️. The downsides are the short chapters, there could be some more details added on to describe the world and the characters more. Also the updates ... its been a long time since the last update. Which really sucks cause i am looking forward to a lot more of this wonderful story!!!!!

Novelcat_Wind
Novelcat_WindLv1Novelcat_Wind

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