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CoffeePot1yrCommentedthis is some stellar writing
He started crying, reaching for something with his hand. It was so dark. And the voices around were too loud. He needed light, he needed to touch something real, because now, he wasn't sure if he was still dreaming, if the voices were in his head or if they were somewhere in the dark, watching him, ready to assault him and repeat these horrible acts again.- CoffeePot1yrCommented
I assume you mean "his safety belt" here, "his security's belt" would be haru tightening the security guard's belt.
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well even if your writing has a few very small mistakes, your writing is still superb, which vastly overshadows any nitpick about your grammar. although, the easiest way fix those is to write your story in Microsoft Word with grammarly installed. alternatively you can install thr grammarly plugin for your browser and it may work directly on this site. can't wait to read the rest or your story, good luck 🥰
Ch 3 2 : The SS Club - CoffeePot1yrCommentedCh 8 7 : Ogata Akihito
- CoffeePot1yrCommentedCh 7 6 : Powerful [ R18 ]
- CoffeePot1yrCommentedCh 3 2 : The SS Club
- CoffeePot2yrReplied to SimMermaid
huh, poor alphas, always having to use condoms
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so just wondering, are omegas fertile all the time In your AU? or are the condoms just for easier clean up? I can't imagine any alpha would willingly use a condom unless there was a real risk, not just inconvenience, but then again Lionel is exceedingly considerate.
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some very on the nose foreshadowing 😆
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so I assume Lionel's pheromones affected Kaito because they're not bonded/mated yet?
This book has been deleted. - CoffeePot2yrCommentedCh 1 Vol. 1 The Broken Blue doll
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there's nothing socially acceptable about the cuddle puddles these guys regularly have, why they would start caring now is beyond me 😆
I end up sitting crosslegged in between Virgil and Dale, it's not really surprising considering they've been sticking as close as socially acceptable to me. - CoffeePot2yrCommented
I'd be surprised if she wasn't apprehensive about him going into the forest, considering what happened the last two times
She grumpily agrees which is a little strange because she had never minded before even when I chose to go all the way to the creek all by myself, but I pay it no mind. - CoffeePot2yrCommentedCh 84 ~°~Chapter Eighty-four~°~
- CoffeePot2yrCommentedCh 95 "I'm not a pervert"
- CoffeePot2yrCommented
a lot of gaslighting going on in this novel so far
"Just Elise being her nutty self," Shana reassures me, a smug smirk on her face. - CoffeePot2yrCommented
but he is complaining, that's exactly what he is doing 😂
"Your name's too uncool. Who the heck made a name such as Drane." I say, speaking the truth. Let's admit it, Drane is not a cool name. Not now, not ever. But I am not complaining. - CoffeePot2yrReplied to Zazril79
no worries, you and the author's grammar, structure and editing is already as close to perfect as can be expected of something you get no pay for. keep up the good work! 🥰
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Well I can't give you to many of my personal ideas or I'll have nothing novel left for my own books😅, but one of my favourites that I read in another book is that alpha children are bitters and will especially bite other omega children and their mother.
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never mind lol, I realised right after posting this that the info dump chapter exists now and I got my answers there 😅
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