Forestwind3
Harem development is getting good but I hope the author will decide who will be the queen of the harem. At least, she would be the first to have an important decision without mc's consent. Lexi has this potential while Kate doesn't have it as of now. I wonder if you are going to make all equal or make sure one of the harems will lead them all? Otherwise, without proper handle of the harem will lead to different factions for sure. Of course, not in fantasy all depends on the author.
It's sooo goood! it's really enjoyable to read a story with so many interesting parts, that come together to for a machine of a novel! I really wasn't expecting much from a(**) novel, but you have done it right! Keep building the characters the way you are! Author your really doing a great job, I will be keeping a very close eye on this one☺️
Honestly...all I can say is well done. Very nice and seamless harem development that even hints at the prospects of future members or hook ups. Although whether Dan agrees to that might be another question haha. Please don't drop this novel, even if you need breaks (which you should take) don't forget about this novel.