MEGA SPOILERS BE AWARE. Novel started out good, no complaints. But the forced tragedy used in this novel is actually so terrible and unbearable to read. It's one thing to have a hellscape on earth with people dying, killing each other, but to have the mc lose his entire party in a few chapters is a pretty bad reading experience having already read quite far into the novel. I could understand a few members, to help the mc toughen up, experience despair whatever. But everyone including the love interest is a bit much imo as far as tragedy in novels go.

I think the constant headache is a really bad way to nerf the mc for plot convenience, even if it is relevant to the story and the mc's memories.

How do we vote to get it picked?

I really like this novel. Can't wait to see how the relationships develop between the love interests and the MC. Really hope this gets picked, it has a lot of potential.

Can someone explain the romance in this book, I want to know when we would start to see any signs. I usually read harem novels, so I am curious about how the romance is developed in this story.

This novel is so clean man, loving it.

Good chapter, the story is getting interesting. Excited to see how he copes with the mood swings. Don't give up author, people will value your hard work.

Looking forward to More chapters. Deserves More exposure. Hopefully this novel wins the competition 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

Glad to see you back.

You're writing is very good, well above the web novel standard. Writing novels is a challenge for sure, but don't be discouraged. Just keep writing and your story will flow. You have a great setting/beginning for this story and I am excited to see where you go with it. Keep up the great work.

He better claim Her everything eventually.

Honestly...all I can say is well done. Very nice and seamless harem development that even hints at the prospects of future members or hook ups. Although whether Dan agrees to that might be another question haha. Please don't drop this novel, even if you need breaks (which you should take) don't forget about this novel.