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M1s3ry

M1s3ry

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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry28d
    Posted

    It's not bad. It looks promising but we can't tell certainly with just one chapter. How about adding more? Hehe. I hope there won't be poison in this novel, otherwise that's really gotta be unfortunate.

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    Fantasy: The Rise of Evil God
    Fantasy · Bleakness
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry28d
    Commented

    Keep it up dude!

    Ch 1 A Lucky Start
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    Fantasy: The Rise of Evil God
    Fantasy · Bleakness
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry8mth
    Commented

    according to my guess, he is still currently locked in his hotel and has never gone outside for a year. [img=faceslap]

    Ch 61 Shua!
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    Otherworldly Summoning System
    Anime & Comics · PelicanEel
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    A kind and gentle mother who suddenly became a slutty whore real quick. Lol

    Ch 46 A Mother's Pent-up Desires
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Replied to jtw1000

    Most original novels started pretty well but were eventually abandoned. I can more or less expect that this novel will be like that, however, it doesn't matter. Of course, who knows if this novel will be different and will be even completed. :)

    Ch 29 Season 1 Episode 29: Having A Drink
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    Evil Samurai In Cultivation World
    Eastern Fantasy · Zerosky
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    Good novel but it's a pity that there are only several chapters and may even abandon in the future. Still, more chapters to come!

    Ch 29 Season 1 Episode 29: Having A Drink
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    Evil Samurai In Cultivation World
    Eastern Fantasy · Zerosky
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    Did she just clean his d*ck full of blood?

    Ch 39 Loving Sister (2)
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    Though I started to dislike this novel a long time ago because the way it was written was pretty off, and even not suitable for guys like me. But I have to say the ending is quite satisfactory, at least it was much more realistic than I thought. After all, it was common where an mc's wives are living happily together lmao. A moment of silence for Qin Feixue. F

    Ch 70 Epilogue: Mistress
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    His Beautiful Mother in Law
    Contemporary Romance · BlaccLotus
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    That's sad considering it's a good story, and even if you don't like the mc being emotionless you can still add an 'emotion' only for his women under him. The mc may be emotionless at first but is very possessive, overbearing, etc. There was also another novel I've found where an mc was a total evil. Give it a read maybe you'll find which is the right path for your story.

    Ch 17 Not A Chapter
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    The Incubus God
    Eastern Fantasy · PrinceWithUndies
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    Moarrrr~

    Ch 7 Future Plans
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    More chapters! I hope there won't be too many dramas, it would be better if the mc is not naivè too.

    Ch 4 CHAPTER - 3
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    Imperium Vita
    Fantasy · Matdoxv
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Posted

    It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read. I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!

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    Gate of Immortality
    Eastern Fantasy · starry8sword
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Posted

    This novel is good especially if you like an evil mc. Although it is not as interesting as Reverend Insanity, you will still see how he grows becoming a god. Unfortunately, it's kinda boring especially if you compare him to Fang Yuan who always schemes like there is a lot of fighting scenes. Nevertheless, it will eventually get better. I hope Webnovel will add the dark novel about an mc who was reborn as an abyss creature and possessed the power of the virus. That novel was much more interesting as it is full of fights and invasion. :)

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    Soul Of Negary
    Fantasy · Xu Ming
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Posted

    This is indeed a sacred book for guys but unfortunately, it was too fast. I hope the author will try to y'know build momentum when the mc is going to soak a woman. Just like when he was soaking his teacher. Maybe after they separated from her boyfriend then the mc appeared to soak her. Then while doing bible study, her teacher should've to act reluctant and even whisper "sorry *boyfriend's name*" to make it even hotter like forbidden stuff. Maybe it will spice up things rather than plain. Nevertheless, it's all good! Society needs you. :P

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    I Received a Sex System From The Goddess of Lust and Beauty
    Fantasy · Ancient_Dream
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    I've been reading for several years and what I hate the most is an mc who can actually kill an enemy but won't do so. This kind of shit is simply retarded hence it's quite natural you'll get criticized since no one wants a beta mc. A threat to any of your loved ones is already a reverse scales of most people and if they had the power of the mc they will surely kill that person instead of acting like a beta. If you don't want him to kill people you might as well limit his robots, make sure there won't be fighting robots in the future. Nevertheless, although the result wouldn't be bloody it is still quite good. A threat must be killed especially if it threatens your safety several times.

    Ch 37 Femme Fatale Shopping
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    Fantastic Life Tycoon(dropped)
    Magical Realism · Bad_Road
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Replied to House

    1. Reverend Insanity 2. Warlock of the Magus World 3. Renegade Immortal 4. Mechanical Emperor God I forgot the others but mostly they are not translated yet so I can only read with the help of google translator. If you don't mind using google translator go to qidian.com and click the 'dark fantasy' there are some good shits there.

    Ch 35 Andrea.exe has stopped working
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    Fantastic Life Tycoon(dropped)
    Magical Realism · Bad_Road
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Replied to Bad_Road

    Haha, my bad I am one of those picky readers, and what I like the most are those extreme mc's or let's just say an evil mc. It makes my head hurt whenever I see such a wimp mc knowing he has the power to destroy the treat in advance. So yep, hopefully, the result will be much more acceptable. :P More chapters to come!

    Ch 35 Andrea.exe has stopped working
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    Fantastic Life Tycoon(dropped)
    Magical Realism · Bad_Road
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    If his enemy wasn't killed or all his limbs were broken I'll surely rate this novel 1 star with my 7 accounts. Damn, whenever I read a situation similar to this they will always let the person go giving them a chance to brew a conspiracy causing the mc's important people to almost die or even themselves and they will surely die if not because of the aura of the protagonist. Don't let us down, Author! Since he wants to be a king then he should know when to use mercy and ruthlessness.

    Ch 35 Andrea.exe has stopped working
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    Fantastic Life Tycoon(dropped)
    Magical Realism · Bad_Road
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    Not a bad novel the only thing I worry is that most original novels like this were abandoned later. Because this kind of novel is also kinda slow to spice up and will probably be better to read once there are already many chapters. Most importantly, this plot is generic the only thing that makes it interesting is probably the smut scenes (for me). Of course, I also have a suggestion to make this novel spice up such as making his own forces while also dominating another territory for resources or (something¿) Because most novels I read similar to this were mostly face slaps and mc getting beaten by enemies first before managing to defeat them. So, it would be better if this mc will be the one who will dominate probably by using witts and iron-blooded means. I remember reading Mechanical God-Emperor, the plot was similar to generic novels and it could be even repetitive in the later chapters. However, despite its repetition I still like it. Why? Because of the MC's character. Very smart. Schemer. Very decisive. Extremely Ruthless (could be even said to be cold-blooded because he killed trillions of living creatures in the end before reaching the top) and he did this all for resources. So I hope the author won't drop this novel and also won't use the usual personality MCs of generic novels. The novel will be better even if it's generic as long as the mc is pretty cool, what's more there are some melon scenes. I believe the author will surely not disappoint us readers and I hope more chapters to come!

    Ch 7 Back Home
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    Rise Of Evil Sword God
    Eastern Fantasy · TheShadowLord
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  • M1s3ry
    M1s3ry1yr
    Commented

    Harem development is getting good but I hope the author will decide who will be the queen of the harem. At least, she would be the first to have an important decision without mc's consent. Lexi has this potential while Kate doesn't have it as of now. I wonder if you are going to make all equal or make sure one of the harems will lead them all? Otherwise, without proper handle of the harem will lead to different factions for sure. Of course, not in fantasy all depends on the author.

    Ch 24 Their Various Thoughts and Feelings (2)
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    The Rise of the Ero Masseuse System
    Fantasy · Forestwind3
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