Most original novels started pretty well but were eventually abandoned. I can more or less expect that this novel will be like that, however, it doesn't matter. Of course, who knows if this novel will be different and will be even completed. :)
Though I started to dislike this novel a long time ago because the way it was written was pretty off, and even not suitable for guys like me. But I have to say the ending is quite satisfactory, at least it was much more realistic than I thought. After all, it was common where an mc's wives are living happily together lmao. A moment of silence for Qin Feixue. F
That's sad considering it's a good story, and even if you don't like the mc being emotionless you can still add an 'emotion' only for his women under him. The mc may be emotionless at first but is very possessive, overbearing, etc. There was also another novel I've found where an mc was a total evil. Give it a read maybe you'll find which is the right path for your story.
It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read. I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!
This novel is good especially if you like an evil mc. Although it is not as interesting as Reverend Insanity, you will still see how he grows becoming a god. Unfortunately, it's kinda boring especially if you compare him to Fang Yuan who always schemes like there is a lot of fighting scenes. Nevertheless, it will eventually get better. I hope Webnovel will add the dark novel about an mc who was reborn as an abyss creature and possessed the power of the virus. That novel was much more interesting as it is full of fights and invasion. :)
This is indeed a sacred book for guys but unfortunately, it was too fast. I hope the author will try to y'know build momentum when the mc is going to soak a woman. Just like when he was soaking his teacher. Maybe after they separated from her boyfriend then the mc appeared to soak her. Then while doing bible study, her teacher should've to act reluctant and even whisper "sorry *boyfriend's name*" to make it even hotter like forbidden stuff. Maybe it will spice up things rather than plain. Nevertheless, it's all good! Society needs you. :P
I've been reading for several years and what I hate the most is an mc who can actually kill an enemy but won't do so. This kind of shit is simply retarded hence it's quite natural you'll get criticized since no one wants a beta mc. A threat to any of your loved ones is already a reverse scales of most people and if they had the power of the mc they will surely kill that person instead of acting like a beta. If you don't want him to kill people you might as well limit his robots, make sure there won't be fighting robots in the future. Nevertheless, although the result wouldn't be bloody it is still quite good. A threat must be killed especially if it threatens your safety several times.
1. Reverend Insanity 2. Warlock of the Magus World 3. Renegade Immortal 4. Mechanical Emperor God I forgot the others but mostly they are not translated yet so I can only read with the help of google translator. If you don't mind using google translator go to qidian.com and click the 'dark fantasy' there are some good shits there.
Haha, my bad I am one of those picky readers, and what I like the most are those extreme mc's or let's just say an evil mc. It makes my head hurt whenever I see such a wimp mc knowing he has the power to destroy the treat in advance. So yep, hopefully, the result will be much more acceptable. :P More chapters to come!
If his enemy wasn't killed or all his limbs were broken I'll surely rate this novel 1 star with my 7 accounts. Damn, whenever I read a situation similar to this they will always let the person go giving them a chance to brew a conspiracy causing the mc's important people to almost die or even themselves and they will surely die if not because of the aura of the protagonist. Don't let us down, Author! Since he wants to be a king then he should know when to use mercy and ruthlessness.
Not a bad novel the only thing I worry is that most original novels like this were abandoned later. Because this kind of novel is also kinda slow to spice up and will probably be better to read once there are already many chapters. Most importantly, this plot is generic the only thing that makes it interesting is probably the smut scenes (for me). Of course, I also have a suggestion to make this novel spice up such as making his own forces while also dominating another territory for resources or (something¿) Because most novels I read similar to this were mostly face slaps and mc getting beaten by enemies first before managing to defeat them. So, it would be better if this mc will be the one who will dominate probably by using witts and iron-blooded means. I remember reading Mechanical God-Emperor, the plot was similar to generic novels and it could be even repetitive in the later chapters. However, despite its repetition I still like it. Why? Because of the MC's character. Very smart. Schemer. Very decisive. Extremely Ruthless (could be even said to be cold-blooded because he killed trillions of living creatures in the end before reaching the top) and he did this all for resources. So I hope the author won't drop this novel and also won't use the usual personality MCs of generic novels. The novel will be better even if it's generic as long as the mc is pretty cool, what's more there are some melon scenes. I believe the author will surely not disappoint us readers and I hope more chapters to come!
Harem development is getting good but I hope the author will decide who will be the queen of the harem. At least, she would be the first to have an important decision without mc's consent. Lexi has this potential while Kate doesn't have it as of now. I wonder if you are going to make all equal or make sure one of the harems will lead them all? Otherwise, without proper handle of the harem will lead to different factions for sure. Of course, not in fantasy all depends on the author.
This is tantamount of seeking troubles and may even attract the attention of powerful beings. He was previously from a lower realm why does he want to stand out so much? As a devil himself, he should've hidden so as to not get killed. I don't know I just think this mc is quite conceited. There are a lot of ways to gain negative emotions such as manipulating other kingdoms to wage war by inciting them. He seem to be getting ahead of himself or is he? Let's see how the author will write the mc. I hope it won't be that clichè though it seems to be going in that path.
Author, are you going to make the mc without morals and bottom line? Otherwise, there would be a considerable amount of readers who will stop reading this. Though I like this kind of mc I suggest not making the woman kill his family especially without a proper reason. Of course, if you do not care about losing readers then I still support you because there are only very few novels like this exists. More chapters to come!
Make it crazy but not too exaggerated. I hope that this mc will also have his own dominating style not just waiting for the enemies to attack him otherwise it's generic. I also hope the drama in this novel won't be too much or it will be too boring. More chapters to come!