Daichi_TBR193
I liked all the reading, you mentioned the most important, without doing many twists and plots that are always shown in many "fanfic", the incorporation of new knowledge, improvements for the empire, a new girl for the haren, again you put other perspectives , but they were not very long, since you also presented people who will be useful, either as part of their haren or as a new force for the empire, and I can not hope that destiny holds for the avatar (it will be that naive would be another addition to zuko's power as one of her guardians). - and of course I wanted to see Tohp's long-awaited R18, but you can't always have everything in one chapter. - In conclusion I liked the long chapter, with small additions, among other things.
this is hands down, one of the best avatar fics out there. Have you tried publishing it in other sites to get more views (fanfiction.net, questinable questing, etc)? i am sure this would get a ton of reviews really fast. Who are you basing ri huo appearence on? i am imagining teenage version of boudica from fate with ponytail and all. also, gold hair? is she the spirit of earth, just like yue is for water and ri huo for fire? cause i dont remember a blondie at all.
Hey Author. Hard to believe its been 4 months since Book One finished. Luckily I have your equally awesome Kryptonian Knight story to keep me occupied. Anyway, I'm not sure if you still follow these comments so this might be lost in the wild but I felt like fiddling around some in photo editing and thought I'd give it a whirl to see what kind of covers I could come up with for everyone's favorite fire lord. Cover1: Based off the current, with just a title slapped on.
This is my favourite avatar fanfic I have ever read. I like your other fanfics to but this one in my opinion was the best. Now dont get me wrong your other fanfics are great to, for example if this ff is 99 out of 100 then your other ff are also in the 90s. I know you said you will focus on your other ff but are you going to continue this one this year? Im finding myself checking every week for a update but at least we have your other ff. Keep up the good work and good luck with your future fanfics. P.S. Thanks for the mass update on HP:Wizards and Demigods.
El mejor fics de avatar todo de la creación del reino hasta la incorporación de las demas naciones y los nuevos dobladores fueron combinados bastante bien, sobre todo el mc que tomo un camino original y propio sin tratar de seguir la historia original ni convertirse en seguidor de Ang solo porque es el protagonista, este trata de crear su propio mundo y remplazar al mismos avatar, también sus relaciones parecen bastante natural y le estas dando a cada chicha su propio propósito y objetivo además de ser amantes del mc, espero que continúe pronto con el libro dos y ver como resulta su revolucion contra el avatar y su siclo