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Wait, does that mean the DC universe is critical to his universe jumping ability? As in, without DC, he'd be forever stuck in a singular universe? What if he went to a universe that itself had multi-universal travel?
I get there are a lot of weird translation issues that come from being a Chinese novel or whatever, and some hiccups are to be expected... but this one really takes the cake. I don't know if its just a translation error or cultural difference but I just can't see "pig shit" as being a nickname.
After like 8 chapters in a row with this joke, I think it's grown a bit stale.
Translation. How well it is, I can't really say. I've only just found the original. He makes some corrections at least. Like he calls Pepper by the right name instead of "Little Chili" like machine translations want to do. But at the same time, he never got Shredder right. Lol Anyway! The name of it is Marvel: Fusion. You can find a machine translation at mtlnovel if you're interested.
A good chapter but wow it was short. It felt like half the chapter was spent reiterating that he could have saved civilians, but didn't. Literally its repeated so many times at the start with just different flavor text, all essentially saying the same thing. This entire chapter was basically one minute of dialogue.
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Personally, this is perhaps one of the weakest chapters. Feels like it was just a brief lewd, system stats and excuse to rewrite world to handwave harems being a socially accepted thing. Not saying any of that is bad, just that it didn't feel like much really happened.
If you wanted a reason to break them up, you could just have her end it by dating some actor or being caught sleeping with some casting director or something. You know, the common practice stuff that was rampant in hollywood at the time. Bringing in the mother and drama with it... I mean, it isn't bad, but you have a history of being really heavy-handed when dealing with personal drama where you amplify the antagonists flaws and faults to insane degrees to make it so incredibly one-sided that its almost impossible to feel even the slightest sympathy for anyone not Kazir. Like with his ex wife, where her only defining characteristics seemed to be crafted solely to be as horrible a person as possible.
My only complaint is Amazo. MC decides to adopt him and then tosses him in jail. We never see or hear about him again for several chapters, seemingly forgotten, but now he shows up again like its a casual thing. I hope the MC has been interacting with him regularly up to this point.
Voted. I appreciate the gesture but it is annoying to get "false" chapter updates. I'd be different if you were taking a hiatus but when we're talk about like a day or two late? Psh, that's nothing. Some authors take weeks to update, you're already way ahead of the curve.
Home Alone may not be my favorite, but I think it should be the most popular. It gets aired pretty regularly on the holidays in my experience. So even if it doesn't explode in sales during the initial release, it should have a lot of long-term potential. I wonder if its too late for him to grab Back to the Future. He could even do a few tweaks to the future aspect in the sequel to make it more closely match what it will really be like. It'll be like a prediction come true lol.
I've only read one Hollywood fic that wasn't Harem. It's also the one with the relationship I remember the most. Imo, a single love interest is best.
I don't think Peter's wrong, but hopefully he avoids the pitfalls of "extreme" that most comic characters fall in. IMO, most heroes always suffer from extremes. It's like they either have to absolutely never kill, for any reason.... or they fall and murder everything that breaths like some edgelord of justice.