pen_inker
Well, first of all, my respect to the author who has managed to create a very interesting world. He uses ample descriptions and the worldbuilding is done in a decent manner. Characters are not very stereotypical and one-dimensional either. They are very intriguing and likeable. Also, I really liked the way the author portrayed his actions scenes. Should the spelling mistakes in the chapters be fixed, I am certain that the story will become something truly special. I am looking forward to the new chapters.
Hello Author, I have read and reviewed your book and it is nice read. If you are interested in distributing your work or any future works/books on a platform that will pay you up to 400$ based on word count and publishing frequency, then mail bayoeditor@gmail.com A brief sample and link will be appreciated when reaching out.
Ignoring the Punctuation in the first few chapters. Working Review(Will Update as I follow this series in future) It's been a while since I've binge read something because it was genuinely interesting & fun to read. The Authors pacing and writing is really good. As well as the gods fights, am.excoted to see where the gods and the prince's journey goes and meets. Also explore the lore of this world the authors made... Te internal wife beef/Drama is also brewing which is really intriguing. As all baby mama drama is in actuality lolđ The fluidity of the story is rlly goodđđž... keep up the good work author. Am also really enjoying the African Mythology inspiration his drew from, I think from West africa(nigeria) I might be wrong...anyway it's really dope! P.S Just update the Punctuation in the first 5 chapters and your good. Also I hope the elder Returns I think he has a big role...
Unique premise on which this story is built on The synopsis was a bit confusing , hopefully you could tweak it a bit fight description could use some work as well as dialogue ( dialogue is always getting split up making it difficult to follow who was talking) a few problems with punctuation as well as a few grammatical errors, try to fix those anyways enjoyable story all in all, good work author đ
Black Angel or African Gods is such a nice captivating title to make a reader want to know the information in the book. The blurb is great as well. I really enjoyed reading it. I love the genre of the book, it's that of a historical fiction and a fantasy that tells us about conflict between gods. Great idea! I love the usage of diction, your choice of words are well developed. Your work is just a great art.