Review Detail of R_F_T_S in BLACK ANGEL OR AFRICAN GODS

Unique premise on which this story is built on The synopsis was a bit confusing , hopefully you could tweak it a bit fight description could use some work as well as dialogue ( dialogue is always getting split up making it difficult to follow who was talking) a few problems with punctuation as well as a few grammatical errors, try to fix those anyways enjoyable story all in all, good work author 😊