Zero_Kiriyu
I hate Yaoi. I cannot emphasis that enough. But I will always provide a fair review. I have read up to 2 chapters, and the story premise is there and itβs solid. But if there is yaoi, please place a tag that writes yaoi on your novel. I will not read anymore of this as it is not my cup of tea, but Iβm sure others would enjoy this much more than me. Keep it up, and do t forget to put a yaoi tag on there.
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:/ was hoping this would actually be interesting with challenges towards their relationship and actual hurdles to overcome but it's not. harry having a weird attitude for someone who was abused for 11 years, there is no intervention by dumbledore for his grandparents to take harry, draco isn't spoiled and bratty even though he would be, the general accepting attitude to same sex relationships is something I highly doubt from the pureblooded wizarding community, and just in general it's forced. Love at first sight I guess but they barely had time to exchange greeting before draco was all over harry. Idk I'm not a fan of forced romance without plot behind it. It's just boring. I'm going to read the rest of the released chapters so far, but honestly it's not looking like much other than a forced relationship with the barest amount of plot behind it, but it has some solid grammar and the descriptions are really clear. Good writing, but not a fan of the story itself.