Ive read quite a lot of fan fics since I’ve joined WN and I have to say this is one of the best I’ve had the pleasure of reading the writing quality is great the characters are amazing and the story is absolutely incredible. Only down side is that it’s summer IRL right now so the updates are a little so but overall I’ve got to say this is a great fan fic. Ps keep up the good work author I’m loving this story. :)
Haven't really read the fic, but since it's basically Date A Bullet but fanfic, I'd imagine the writer to fully well know what he's doing. Then I saw it's a multiverse that doesn't go into DxD, the confirmation of no Yuri and the slow pacing and I could already review this with just those alone. Writing Quality in this site is always a 3 for me regardless of whatever it is, why? Because Inkstone doesn't really provide much... flexibility in writing so yeah. Story Development is basically categorized into 2 things when talking about a fic, time skipping vodka or the slow wines. This is the slow wine so it immediately has a good ground for a good story, add the fact that it's Tokisaki "Bleh" Kurumi herself, you just can't go wrong. Character Design is fanfics with no OC is automatic 4 or 5 as long as they don't really break character, Kurumi is relatively easy to write and her personality is pretty much an anti-hero twisted justice bringing psycho. Nothing you can go wrong with as long as you know what you're doing really. Updating Stability good. Not dropped, good stuff, definitely not bad rates. It's well known in this site that as long as it's not dropped, there's updates. World Background to be honest, a multiverse fic can NEVER have 2 stars below in this category simply because the world is already done... However, you get bonus points if you expand on said universe more so. Though, I repeat, I haven't read the fanfic, I will do now. Continue the good work author~