Reviews of The Crawford's Multiverse of Madness
The Crawford's Multiverse of Madness
The_Young_Flash
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It is the best Resident Evil fanfic that I have read and even more, of the movies, not to mention that when they make a Fanfic of the game and not of the movies, I do not understand anything, I have never played it ... do not insult me, those fans. I had no childhood. (Use a translator from Latin Spanish to English. In case you don't understand something)
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This is the author here to tell you about my novel. Now if you want an honest review then I'll tell you that my book isn't for everyone. It starts off in resident evil then goes to 'I am number four' otherwise known as Lorien Legacies... I am focusing on movies that are underappreciated and all. Background and everything is good. I feel that my character OC is well rounded out. He may have a lack of emotions but that just makes him more empathetic and not unable to enjoy certain things. His first thought is to kill anyone that could be a threat but slowly this changes due to his lovers. Now the harem will be small... rather I should say I plan to visit so many movies and the harem will be small in comparison. There will be no long separations, rather when they separate it will be for their own growth. There will be no NTR, or anything like that but this is mature genre... maybe some of his girls will betray him or want to kill him later.. My ex gfs sometimes wanna kill me too, at one point they loved me.. haha... It's just life uk? There will be gods, evolution, scifi, romance, slice of life and everything in between. And finally I ask that everyone leaves an honest review. I have rewrote starting from the prologue so I hope those who read it previous begins to re-read it.
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First of all I will declare that the idea of ββa resident evil fanfiction seems incredible to me ... unfortunately it is MANDATORY to have knowledge of it, because during writing many important data are lost (scenary where it goes, description of the character, etc). THE people who do not have knowledge will lose Second, the introduction of the character in the conflict is too forced, considering that he hardly entered the new world He goes directly to look for a girl he does not even know without collecting information of the world, neglected for "the perfect man" IF YOU KNOW ABOUT RESIDENT EVIL READ IF NOT OR YOU PAY CLOSE ATTENTION TO DETAILS, DONT READ
Take mc's background away and you have amazing novel. But when you take into account that he is super genius from civilization light years ahead with advanced combat training and you have one huge wtf?! moment. Are we supposed to believe that mc would not have absolute superiority in cyber warfare? Are we supposed to believe mc would not just create weapons and machines to deal with all the zombies? How is it that mc seems to just constantly go head first into action doing all kinds of stupid mistakes like some action hero? How is it that mc is constantly caught off guard or defeated with mc's insane technological advantage and other abilities? This story could make sense if we gave these nanites to some random civilian from modern times, but we have someone whose primary goal is self preservation, is more rational than normal people and has crazy experience and other advantages. This just really doesn't add up.
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Be warned this story although well written isn't for everyone, the few chapters i've read disturbed me greatly. I have concluded that only selfish psychopaths and people with sadistic tendencies are the only people who would truly be able to appreciate the stories. I do not know if the author is aware, but the human psych he portrays in the story is damaging to the mental health of the readers, consider yourself warned! Enjoy the dark abyss that is the human psych!
End of vol 1 so far. βWill continue but I'm very much confused and annoyed. Will update my rating once I've read more. For now that is my rating (4.0-all 5 stars exept for Storg Development with 3 stars and Character Design with 2 stars) Reasons/Questions: Minimal changes to none so far based on the ending of Volume 1. Which is BS considering the supposedly butterfly effect of his presence in the story. Another BS as well is regarding MC's budding emotions to essentially nerf his rationality and intelligence. Him being made a creepy possessive like teenager all pumped up by hormones. Pretty disappointing. Also, didn't the MC have guns as well? So confused why he didn't use it so far. Also it should be an advanced or a bit better than conventional ones, considering him supposedly being genius and cautious. This is based on how he thinks he is being chased by someone to the point of chasing him all they way to another universe and him having unheard of levels of survival instinct from his backstory. Therefore he should be continuously thinking of ways to strengthen himself or how to better protect himself in whatever way possible to survive. And in a planet where no mystical energy and barriers exist, etc. Cold weapons will always be more safe and efficient weapon of choice. This also proven considering his hand were almost punctured through by a bullet near the end of Vol 1. Moreover, what enemy are we talking about here? I thought everyone in Universe 0 died. So no evidence of him being alive in the first place should be present to let his enemies know he is alive. And even if there is a way to know. With him being the creator of the device to transport himself out of Universe 0 despite its barriers being strengthened to multiple levels not knowing where he will end up to. How could his enemies know and chase him? That would make their technology the same level or just a tad bit lower compared or even higher to what the MC has access to. And with him being a Homo-Superior which are Pinnacle Race in terms of technology and including his advantages gained from his family should be impossible. Futhermore, isn't 'psyche' pertains to mind? So how can his soul be damaged if Alice dies?? Shouldn't the soul damage be an effect of the more sacred connection being the 'soul mates' instead of the 'psyche-imprinting' ???
Why the Heck is this not more popular? I mean sure you have to actually use your brain to follow the story and actually understand it some times, but isn't that the beauty of reading sci-fi and fantasy together? Grammar is great, story development is very consistent, characters are actually unique and not just mannequins without feelings and thoughts, it updates daily, and the world background is so freaking good, and you don't always have to watch the movies to understand what's happening (he doesn't follow Canon much lol). I mean what more can you ask, this is a gem and I will stand by this opinion no matter what.
