shukriya author,though its only 5 chapters,it looks awesome. looking forward to more chapters

Your doing a good job author,am liking what you wrote.

This is my 2nd all time favourite novel,I want to thank the author for the hours of good read. when are you releasing the rewritten version?

author you need a good translator,half the time you don't even know what is being said.

comrade.. you worked hard

there's just way too much infodump,there's whole chapters of him just thinking out his thoughts.

Tang san.. is that you? lol there is certainly a lot of infodump in thos novel

MTL version. it's painful to read........

This has my approvel:) this looks very promising and am looking forward to the authors work.

After spending an hour or two reading this fanfiction,all I got was a headache,caused by the this shite. not going to go into detail as others have already written what's wrong with the story

Renault... that's a bloody 🚗 🚘 honestly some of these authors have a bad naming sense.

this is a fantastic read. hope to read more

what's the title for the one you read?

Your doing good mate,keep it up

loved it bro!

this needs to be translated. words are jumbled up and can't seem to make sense in whole paragraphs

just a question for the author.. have you dropped this book? this is/was one of my favourite books but its been ages since we had a chapter.

here's a few things wrong with the story: mc dresses like a bigger editing is awful,the (he) and (she) winds me up the supposedly powerful mc is a simp.. do I need to say more