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Author here is misusing or misunderstanding what "Mark" is in an engineering standpoint. It is a production marker of a standing version of a manufactured model.
For you plebs out there, the rough translation is God of Spoilers.
The words are *Musutafu, *Area of Interest.
Put a comma properly gosh darn it.
You're mistaking militants for something else aren't you?
This is a wall of text. Practice saying verbally what you want the character to be saying, it will help it be more organic.
what irks me is the flow of the dialogue. If you read this out loud, it will sound like someone reading a description instead of someone actually talking. I suggest you practice the dialogue verbally before writing it down to check if it would flow organically or not.
That's BS. earlier it was described that ailin matched the Vice captains reiatsu.
Wow. the grammar was okay in the early chapters. But it's becoming stomach churning wuxia cringeness but reading about japanese cast characters using wuxia expressions is urgh.
what the? A very wuxia way to talks "I hope you bla bla bla, otherwise i'll bla bla bla"
11 name days, 11 name days darn it. not 11 days
get revenge not avenge.
Why do you keep saying vision?
easy. active imagination = childlike wonder
no one promised you anything.