ElianaG
A Very formidable story, it has an awesome plot which I loved. The characters are well-designed. The synopsis was good, in fact it hooked me up to really read it. The chapters were short for me, but it's a great reading experience! Loved the novel, probably this novel has potential. Great job author for the nice story. I Enjoyed reading it!
Great Work !! I see that you tried to build something purely out of your imagination and I feel really good that I found your work. Writing Quality: I saw almost no error which feels like you are cautious of writing quality. The author's vocab is pretty rich. Charters are very realistic. Evelin, Alexander, Rachel, and others have depth and realism. The pace of the story is good as well. This is indeed a great work. The author's dedication is very commendable.