lovely little butterfly 😍
I love the background dropping you have created.Its real good and the idea of a mentally unstable mc is awesome.Hope I can see more chapters from you.💚
Your book is my first in transmigration novels.Its a real good idea.I love your plot designing and revealing.Your characters are good too.I hope you can give us more chapters soon.
The author has got a real good sense of character development and the plot revealing makes my reading easy .Though the world background can be improved the story has got me hooked up.good one.💚
Thank you for your time and consideration.I understand there are errors and I will try to edit it as fast as possible.💚
You have a good writing style.I love the system stories because the plot involves a bigger setting.You have put in the right essense to hook us up in your writing .I just wanted a little bit more of the character detailing because the background you have set is really good.But still it's just minor poi ts of improvement .I loved it.enjoy writing
I think the plot development of the story is pretty good and the fantasy story line you have thought off is awesome.There are some editing errors but that doesn't really hinder the expression of your ideas .Your story has potential and keep writing.I loved it.