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Chinnu_002

Chinnu_002

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lovely little butterfly 馃槏

2019-11-12 JoinedIndia
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Posted

    I love the background dropping you have created.Its real good and the idea of a mentally unstable mc is awesome.Hope I can see more chapters from you.馃挌

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    Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws
    Fantasyiam_adh
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Posted

    Your book is my first in transmigration novels.Its a real good idea.I love your plot designing and revealing.Your characters are good too.I hope you can give us more chapters soon.

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    The Face Behind the System
    Eastern FantasySnowPenguin
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Posted

    The author has got a real good sense of character development and the plot revealing makes my reading easy .Though the world background can be improved the story has got me hooked up.good one.馃挌

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    The Treasure King
    FantasyKirbyisgreen
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to iam_adh

    Thank you for your time and consideration.I understand there are errors and I will try to edit it as fast as possible.馃挌

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    the lion and the tulip
    War&MilitaryChinnu_002
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to SnowPenguin

    Thank you for your time and response .I will try to keep up my writing.馃挌

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    War&MilitaryChinnu_002
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to Kirbyisgreen

    Thank you ...I will try my best to keep up updating stability.馃挌

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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to Kirbyisgreen

    Thank you ...I will try my best to keep up updating stability.馃挌

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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Posted

    You have a good writing style.I love the system stories because the plot involves a bigger setting.You have put in the right essense to hook us up in your writing .I just wanted a little bit more of the character detailing because the background you have set is really good.But still it's just minor poi ts of improvement .I loved it.enjoy writing

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    The Ultimate System Wielder
    Magical RealismNoleafyet
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Posted

    I think the plot development of the story is pretty good and the fantasy story line you have thought off is awesome.There are some editing errors but that doesn't really hinder the expression of your ideas .Your story has potential and keep writing.I loved it.

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    Endbringer
    FantasyShionokami
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to Shionokami

    Thanks..I will keep working on it

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    the lion and the tulip
    War&MilitaryChinnu_002
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to Shionokami

    Thanks..I will keep working on it

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    the lion and the tulip
    War&MilitaryChinnu_002
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to Noleafyet

    Thanks..i will keep working on it

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    the lion and the tulip
    War&MilitaryChinnu_002
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  • Chinnu_002
    Chinnu_0023mth
    Replied to KenRingdomstory

    I don't know for now,but thank you. 馃挌

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    War&MilitaryChinnu_002
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