Review Detail of Blackcrust in Evelina and the Ruby Castle

Great Work !! I see that you tried to build something purely out of your imagination and I feel really good that I found your work. Writing Quality: I saw almost no error which feels like you are cautious of writing quality. The author's vocab is pretty rich. Charters are very realistic. Evelin, Alexander, Rachel, and others have depth and realism. The pace of the story is good as well. This is indeed a great work. The author's dedication is very commendable.