Reviews of The Devourer Emperor: A DxD FanFic

Hi! Shameless Author review here... Every single chapter will have 500 - 600 words each, but I will try to post 3 chapters a day. Please, type what do you think about the story so far! I will try to write the entirety of his past fast enough for us to finally start with DxD. (I guess another 4 or 5 chapters, and we'll start the fun!) Other than that, please suggest Harem Members here, I'll think about each and every single one of them (If they can fit what I have in mind or not)

Writing quality is alright, but the issue is really just the grammar; mainly characters talking, it becomes a headache to try and figure out who's talking since at one moment questionable mc is talking before the overly mysterious system is suddenly talking. 3 stars, I usually give a solid one for **** like this but since the writing quality is a lot better than a lot of the ****ty DxD fanfics I've read; I'll make an exception. Stability of updates, quick releases but short chapters. For those who read at a college level, it's a curse. I give it 3 stars. Story development is okay, a lot of holes that need to be filled in though some can't. An example would be how the **** did the father move a corpse so quickly and efficiently without getting caught? Also weren't there neighbors who noticed the abusive household? 2 fucking stars, yikes. Character design is a fat 1 star simply due to how the broken family, mc seeing everything as fake and not slightly genuine, and of course; classic system personalities. World background gets a 1 not because it's DxD, but due to not writing out the scenery like shops, the looks of people around, how depressing the sky looks; the important little details that make reading enjoyable and so that we're not seeing two people in an empty space talking. My conclusion has come to this, it's a throwaway read. Out of chapters for whatever CN cliche filled garbage? Well here you go, go grind some reading time for Qidian's scummy shop for vouchers.

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Thanks for the chapters, I like the book, but I don't like people who put low-rate stars for nothing. Why should Author describe every kind of detail WHILE you are the ones who asked for the prologue to be less detailed? I don't understand. Do you have a fucking mental problem? I'll give this novel 5 stars, because I think it's worth it. You bring others think that this Fanfic is trash while you all know that there are many others who are trash. You are trash. Just stop bothering this Author who is trying to do a fair work.

Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I agree with the system that has personalities. It is like a parasyte keep talking to the mc. For me I dont like it. But other than that, the long prologue that can end in 3 to 5 chapters is also not good for me. The rest is good though. Waiting for the world background in the story and also the fighting scenes.

Writing quality:good. Can readable. But for actual english native it will make little effort to understand fanfic. Solution:none. Since it already passing grade,why people still have problem regard grammar. Stability update: the best. World building:its on dxd. Keep it up. Character development: it was the best,except mc still doesnt have sacred gear.solution:please "only" devour boosted gear from issei. Its good if mc devour entirely of issei as well because many reader hate that person.

I live the novel so far and I hop you do not drop it and I think that the constant release of chapter make up of the short chapter and I understand that it can be hard to right a long story and I think you did a good job so far and at first when I first started to read it I was confused but as I read more I understand what was going on. and I hop you continue writing this even if you get a bad review because every story hase them.

Books kinda mental, cause it has CD, like it has more CD than half the dxd FF's out there but almost all the **** that happens in the 24 C;'s could've just been done in half, there's no actual plot as of now, cause MC just SI'd...so yah..but the CD is there,, I just hope this improves cause its the only reason I read this, its decent.. Suggestion: before cannon, make something new, show CD, make MC dark [not evil], ruthless, calculative and intelligent and secretive...like show moments of intelligence..of course make MC OP but hide it, dont make a retard that shows off. Add some romance and fluf, just build it...dont make it like the other retarded FF's...and no moms or wives Anyway Gl

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it is a really good story if you skip the prologue it is my opininon you should at least give a try , the chapter are short but the author make up with the number of chapter writen and release we shall see what next

I'll give you a full mark cause its pretty good UwU

This is one of the few fanfics that actually gives a good background to the mc and shows why he has a certain personality. It also has regular updates but kinda short chapters

I don't know what to think of it The chaps are too short and at the beginning of the 18 chaps only to say that his father was an abusive piece of **** that he always beat up his own wife and son, the mother committed suicide, the boy snapt killed his father then he killed himself. only to waste 18 chaps just for that. the grammar is good the rest is so boring that i just skipped everything no idea would not recommend it but see for yourself.

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I have great expectations on this story especially since it is being a told from an angels POV... and the MC seems like not your average angel who could almost have immunity to falling... An angel that can sin in DXD that can get all the girls haha that is what I’m hoping for

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